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Torn in Two
Contributed by
Kericka
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Just when I think I am getting over you, thoughts and memories flood me out of the blue. It plays so slowly in my mind, that day you and your father drove away, you made me believe that everything was going to be okay. Unfortunately fate is something we can't control, my life is like a movie and I'm tired of playing my role. It's been several weeks sense I have seen your face, God please end this pain with your sweet amazing grace. Loneliness is something I claim all the time it's not kind, butI have some to realize that being lonely is just a state of mind. I am so confused and my heart is torn in two, he has all the charm that make me melt, but my heart belongs to you.
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2004-11-05 20:23:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Torn in Two
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:43:47 PM AEST (User
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beautiful. |
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Re: Torn in Two
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 09:57:24 AM AEST (User
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What a beautiful poem with such a clear message for all to read and feel. My hat is off to you and I want to Thank You for sharing yourself with myself and other readers and for giving us your awesome poetic creations to cherish. Great Job. Your Friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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