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Just a pawn in the world of cold hearts
Contributed by
shadowsofmyheart
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Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:52:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Casual glances in my direction,
Expected, but new
This hasn’t happened before,
What does this mean.
Have I blossomed,
Come out of my shell.
I ’m getting the slightest attention,
But from no one.
It doesn’t count,
Its not you that’s noticed me,
Not you who cares.
When I realize he’s looking at me,
I feel different,
Like I guess I’m noticeable now,
That’s the same feeling I have around you.
But why AREN'T you looking at me.
For every moment I feel like I'm noticed,
There’s 100 where no one sees me.
Standing in front of you.
But you don’t see me.
How can it be that different.
Is life just playing tricks on me,
Because that’s how it seems.
Am I just a pawn in this crewel worlds game.
My world is black,
All hearts are cold,
There’s no hope,
That’s what I know.
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Re: Just a pawn in the world of cold hearts
(User Rating: 1 ) by humboldthunny17 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:55:47 PM AEST (User
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Great write. I'm sorry anything is going wrong in your life!! |
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Re: Just a pawn in the world of cold hearts
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:59:17 PM AEST (User
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This poem is beautifully composed by a very talented poet. The message displays a bit of confusion mixed with mature feelings beginning to grow into independence. You are so awesome and please let me know if I am right. I really appreciate the fact you are sharing yourself with myself and other readers as its my Honor to be amongst such a talented poet. Great Job. Your Friend. MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: Just a pawn in the world of cold hearts
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 09:04:22 PM AEST (User
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fantastic write. if he does not notice you, he is not worthy of you. he never will be, so you shouldnt settle for the likes of him. |
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