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Array ( [sid] => 70287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everything or Nothing [time] => 2004-11-05 18:51:55 [hometext] => Saying goodbye to the one I've wasted my love on for far too long [bodytext] => Tell me boy
Do you think that I am
Still obsessed with you
Tell me baby
Do you honestly believe
You're the best that I can do

Look at me boy
Do you notice the feelings
My eyes reveal have changed
Look at me baby
Do you honestly believe
That just cause of you my whole life will be rearranged

And I've been waiting for you
Never getting a chance to show
Everything or nothing that I could give
So you should know
The present is all I need

Hear me boy
And listen to
The wind of change whistling in the air
Hear me baby
And watch me letting go
Cause no one cares for what is fair

Kiss me boy
Can you taste the indifference
Something has been over for so long
Kiss me baby
And keep on wondering
If you were the one who taught me how to stay strong

And I've been waiting for you
Never getting a chance to show
Everything or nothing that I could give
So you should know
The present is all I need
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 52 [informant] => New_York_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Everything or Nothing

Contributed by New_York_Chick on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:51:55 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Tell me boy
Do you think that I am
Still obsessed with you
Tell me baby
Do you honestly believe
You're the best that I can do

Look at me boy
Do you notice the feelings
My eyes reveal have changed
Look at me baby
Do you honestly believe
That just cause of you my whole life will be rearranged

And I've been waiting for you
Never getting a chance to show
Everything or nothing that I could give
So you should know
The present is all I need

Hear me boy
And listen to
The wind of change whistling in the air
Hear me baby
And watch me letting go
Cause no one cares for what is fair

Kiss me boy
Can you taste the indifference
Something has been over for so long
Kiss me baby
And keep on wondering
If you were the one who taught me how to stay strong

And I've been waiting for you
Never getting a chance to show
Everything or nothing that I could give
So you should know
The present is all I need

Copyright © New_York_Chick ... [ 2004-11-05 18:51:55]
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Re: Everything or Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:56:20 PM AEST
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Good poem, but I can't grasp whether you want him or you don't. I have to read it again...let the ink flow! Tiffany J. (Red_October)

Re: Everything or Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:08:07 PM AEST
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yeah sorry about that
It's probably "The present is all I need" line. I had "believe" instead of "need" at first, then I read it over, saw that this word was used enough times before, and I changed it, without reading it over once more. What I meant was that I only believe in what I see right now in front of me, not what I was blinded by in the past.
I'll be more careful next time lol

Re: Everything or Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:42:00 PM AEST
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this one is really good...sounds like a song! and a good farewell one too...it's like a girl's anthem....it's awesome ...i wish more people would right more of these.and it sounds like u got a heck of alot stronger too....this is awesome!!! GOOD JOB!!!

blessed be..stay strong
sirena

Re: Everything or Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 10:17:54 PM AEST
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excellent write.

Re: Everything or Nothing (User Rating: 1 )
by iloveyoux12 on Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 02:56:34 PM AEST
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this is ghood :)

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