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Teardrops Hollowed Sympathy
Contributed by
Dragons_Of_Rose
on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Blue satin starlight's shimmer amongst darkened hues of distant dreams
Accompanied by a hearts teared emptiness of hollowed pathways and hidden streams
A pasts unforgiven playground disturbing the serenity of ones pillowed nights
Constantly awakened by heightened pains of a souls fragiled invites.
Unclouded liquid droplets releasing their soloed lifeform upon impact
Only to leave their trailed presence behind with no form or reason to extract
Silently dropped within the falseness of midnight's clouded opaque foggy mist
A reminder of why night claims its tears and ones hollowed sympathy still exists.
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Dragons_Of_Rose
... [
2002-11-19 15:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Teardrops Hollowed Sympathy
(User Rating: 1 ) by frozensuicide on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 03:59:55 PM AEST (User
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i like this. it has depths and definition. makes you think and vision what your saying.
hug a moose!
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Re: Teardrops Hollowed Sympathy
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 08:57:09 PM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed this one as well
It's creative and gives a good vision
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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