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Exactly who are they?

Watching you was so exciting

You were very inviting

You needed me I was there

You did the impossible you made me care

I could listen to you for eternity

I wanted to open your mind and see

Then you was gone, nowhere to be found

Yet still I feel forever bound

What did you do while you was away

What made you not want to stay

Now you are back

Did you unpack?

I had no idea what I needed at all

But sexy you are my only downfall

If you was a liquid forever I would drink

I love how you look, act and think

You seem almost too good to be real

The only thing I don’t know is how you feel

Everything I like, you tell me you are

You are so close but still so far

Listen close, outside it is starting to rain

I wish it could wash away all of your pain

I liked you then, I like you now I’ll like you forever

You are perfection, so complex, so simple, so clever

The untouchable girl

You make my head swirl
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Untouchable Girl

Contributed by Sinzx7 on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:17:10 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



They say time changes all

Exactly who are they?

Watching you was so exciting

You were very inviting

You needed me I was there

You did the impossible you made me care

I could listen to you for eternity

I wanted to open your mind and see

Then you was gone, nowhere to be found

Yet still I feel forever bound

What did you do while you was away

What made you not want to stay

Now you are back

Did you unpack?

I had no idea what I needed at all

But sexy you are my only downfall

If you was a liquid forever I would drink

I love how you look, act and think

You seem almost too good to be real

The only thing I don’t know is how you feel

Everything I like, you tell me you are

You are so close but still so far

Listen close, outside it is starting to rain

I wish it could wash away all of your pain

I liked you then, I like you now I’ll like you forever

You are perfection, so complex, so simple, so clever

The untouchable girl

You make my head swirl




Copyright © Sinzx7 ... [ 2004-11-05 15:17:10]
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Re: Untouchable Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by PoetChick on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:44:29 PM AEST
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I love your poems and you make me very curious as to who Brenda is and what the obsession with her is all about.


Re: Untouchable Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:48:49 PM AEST
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Sounds like she must be quite the girl. Amazing to hold so much power over you. Almost an obsession....hopefully not too negative of one. Nice depiction of your feelings for her.
~Carrie~


Re: Untouchable Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinzx7 on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:12:24 PM AEST
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The sweetest obsession I have ever known. In a good way of course. She is the only addiction I have ever had...and yes, she is quite the girl. Words can't begin to describe her. Like a rollercoaster.


Re: Untouchable Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:37:14 PM AEST
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Groovy.

--Mothy




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