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[sid] => 7027
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[aid] => Mick
[title] => rejection- plz take time 2 read
[time] => 2002-11-19 15:00:00
[hometext] => This is a teen poem,by a teen. You may think thats its only lads that get rejected but your wrong! it happens to use girls to. Even though this poem rhymes it shows my felings at the time and i would like it if u cud take time to read it and plz tell me what you think. First poem ive ever wrote so dont be to harsh on me!
Thank you Soph [bodytext] => Its weird when I think, the first time that we met, That wild exciting moment –a day I’ll never forget. I knew I was very stupid, and wrong 4 liking you, But there was sumthing bout the way you luked; I hoped u liked me too! If only then I knew, wat trouble it wud bring, I would neva hav asked 4 your number, or request to ring. My life was goin great; my mates had called it quits, I had no probs at all but a boyfriend who luved me to bits! But deep down I wasn’t happy, was luking for sumthing more, It seems my prayers were answered, when you walked through that door. You weren’t like anyone else, I have ever met, You actually new me for me, or so I liked to bet. The fact you didn’t like me, didn’t bother me at the time, I just wanted to talk to you, for me that was fine. It seems now I lost it everything for you, the perfect life I had, I’m single lonely and depressed, and the boy situation is bad! You’re the first boy to reject me; I didn’t take it well, I started messing people about; it was like a living hell. The anger built up inside of me, I didn’t no what to do, So I turned to knifes, to split my wrists in two. I used to sit there every night, ill from all the crying, Shoving Jafa cakes in my mouth, sick to death of trying. Now I can stand here tall, and say I’m over you, For once I am in control, can do what I want to do! But I don’t understand, after all this mess, Why last week did I receive that happy friendly txt? I don’t want you in my life no more, So Goodbye, Bon Voyage, Tsuchus! Go find a leggy blonde to shag, to give to an ego boost! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 39 [informant] => no_angel_y2k [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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