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Array ( [sid] => 70218 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2004-11-04 23:46:07 [hometext] => wrote it during class...couldn't understand the lesson so scribbled this down. [bodytext] => So full of decadence
deeply distraught
lost on my own path
retracing all my old steps

There's no ending to my trails
Just barries and forks along the way
I don't know where to go
I'd scream for help but
I'm all alone

Silence consumes the land
Snow paints this darkened path
so cold..
I want to go home
so cold..
I just need your embrace

No one's here
No one wants to find me
No one even knows to try
Help Me..
Save me before I find myself

I'm going in circles
my memory relapses
Why is it so cold?
I'm surrounded by darkness
I see the light fading

I miss being able to breathe.. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => PsychoticDreamz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Lost

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:46:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

So full of decadence
deeply distraught
lost on my own path
retracing all my old steps

There's no ending to my trails
Just barries and forks along the way
I don't know where to go
I'd scream for help but
I'm all alone

Silence consumes the land
Snow paints this darkened path
so cold..
I want to go home
so cold..
I just need your embrace

No one's here
No one wants to find me
No one even knows to try
Help Me..
Save me before I find myself

I'm going in circles
my memory relapses
Why is it so cold?
I'm surrounded by darkness
I see the light fading

I miss being able to breathe..

Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2004-11-04 23:46:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:51:57 PM AEST
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A masterpeice full with power and truth.
Keep getting bored 'cause this is good stuff.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:08:29 AM AEST
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awesome, i love it!!!!!

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:07:31 AM AEST
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an amazing dark write,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:29:23 AM AEST
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Beautiful and dark, vsiual and intense an awesome poem.

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