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Array ( [sid] => 70190 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ghost In My Garden and …..would you think me to be strong…….. [time] => 2004-11-04 20:09:11 [hometext] => two poems i just wrote to my friend whose playing guitar [bodytext] => There has been a change in me

That has come so unexpectedly

And it is you my humbling truth

All I am is of a consequence of you

The ghost in my garden of dreams

The girl of roses that cause my eyes to stream

Stream because I know I will fall and wake

But my memories no one can ever take

Your hair and lips are my roses red

And your soft skin are the white that

Glow so beautifully like the moon

And eyes like mine that bring me out of

All my reveries to see something rousing

But more so when you flood my head

With words and rhymes that I have never heard

That I have never used never said

I look at you I feel consumed I am enwrapped

And this warmth in me replaced the gloom

After seeing you I have never been the same

I am free and I am finally sane

You are the beauty that haunts my earth

That haunts my heaven and makes my heart yearn

For everything that is you

To join you in death

…..would you think me to be strong……..

Would you think me to be strong?

When I look at you and die

Because I have seen everything I have ever wanted to

Even an endless and unceasingly beautiful blue sky

All the wonders that this world can offer

And sights that not even heaven can compare to

I see all these things when I look into your eyes

…..would you think me to be strong……..

If I fall in love with you every time you cry

That’s the only time I know that you are real

And not just a dream of mine

I love to see you cry

But I have never hurt you and never could

I love to see that you can feel

And see that you are fragile and that you

Just need me as much as I do you

I love to see you smile and if I do not

My day just would not feel complete

I would be incomplete and less than empty

…..would you think me to be strong……..

If I worry about you taking your own life

And not feel like I am enough if I could not

Help you to find a reason to love life

And to love me as I do you

No matter how hard I may ever try

I will always feel that way

…..would you think me to be strong……..

If I said I could not live if I lost you

I would breathe and exist and think

But I would be dead inside I would be

Completely dried out by all my tears

…..would you think me to be strong……..

When you read this that I wrote to you

And when you know I how I feel and

Know how weak I feel when I speak to you

Because I will never feel like its enough


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Ghost In My Garden and …..would you think me to be strong……..

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:09:11 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



There has been a change in me

That has come so unexpectedly

And it is you my humbling truth

All I am is of a consequence of you

The ghost in my garden of dreams

The girl of roses that cause my eyes to stream

Stream because I know I will fall and wake

But my memories no one can ever take

Your hair and lips are my roses red

And your soft skin are the white that

Glow so beautifully like the moon

And eyes like mine that bring me out of

All my reveries to see something rousing

But more so when you flood my head

With words and rhymes that I have never heard

That I have never used never said

I look at you I feel consumed I am enwrapped

And this warmth in me replaced the gloom

After seeing you I have never been the same

I am free and I am finally sane

You are the beauty that haunts my earth

That haunts my heaven and makes my heart yearn

For everything that is you

To join you in death

…..would you think me to be strong……..

Would you think me to be strong?

When I look at you and die

Because I have seen everything I have ever wanted to

Even an endless and unceasingly beautiful blue sky

All the wonders that this world can offer

And sights that not even heaven can compare to

I see all these things when I look into your eyes

…..would you think me to be strong……..

If I fall in love with you every time you cry

That’s the only time I know that you are real

And not just a dream of mine

I love to see you cry

But I have never hurt you and never could

I love to see that you can feel

And see that you are fragile and that you

Just need me as much as I do you

I love to see you smile and if I do not

My day just would not feel complete

I would be incomplete and less than empty

…..would you think me to be strong……..

If I worry about you taking your own life

And not feel like I am enough if I could not

Help you to find a reason to love life

And to love me as I do you

No matter how hard I may ever try

I will always feel that way

…..would you think me to be strong……..

If I said I could not live if I lost you

I would breathe and exist and think

But I would be dead inside I would be

Completely dried out by all my tears

…..would you think me to be strong……..

When you read this that I wrote to you

And when you know I how I feel and

Know how weak I feel when I speak to you

Because I will never feel like its enough






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Re: Ghost In My Garden and …..would you think me to be strong…….. (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:28:46 PM AEST
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Hey...i think this is really beautiful...is this about me..? if it is...this is my comment...you are strong...because you have got this far in life without me...maybe not the way you wanted to...but now i am here for you as well....i just hope you can live in happiness because you have found something to live for...i will talk to you soon...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx


Re: Ghost In My Garden and …..would you think me to be strong…….. (User Rating: 1 )
by addicted2selfharm on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:38:38 PM AEST
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Aww, thanks John. Even though I already said it, well I just said wow, so I guess I'll say more now, heh. It's really sweet, both of them are, and just wow, I guess I feel kind of special, cause no one has ever written anything like that for me, heh. Thank you so much.
((((Hugs))))
--o0o--


Re: Ghost In My Garden and …..would you think me to be strong…….. (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:07:44 PM AEST
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beautiful write. you seem like the chick magnet on this site. =]


Re: Ghost In My Garden and …..would you think me to be strong…….. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:12:28 PM AEST
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Awesomely beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy




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