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White tile Suicide
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:58:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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slit my wrists
i flow away as red
eyes glazed
happiness and panic etched in one
my soul, infinite in death
my blood like poison, it flows
white tile, shocked with red
the blood rusted device, inches from my fingers
crossing paths with the devil
swearing apon God
multiple sins commited
condemning me to hell
blood shot eyes
crooked smile
as i die,
on your kitchen floor
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-11-04 19:58:58]
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Re: White tile Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by nataku on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:42:11 AM AEST
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| Quick and emotionally steady. I like it. |
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Re: White tile Suicide
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:38:36 AM AEST
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great write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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