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I want more
I want the sharp pain gone
Some days its worse then others
Its the last thing I feel before reaching the stars
Its the first thing I feel when I breathe in the morning air
Its gripping me more each day
Tearing into my skin
Making me cry out louder each time
I need more
I want more
I really want the sharp pain gone
Wanting to ease my pain
I wonder if drinking would help
The pain pills I have now aren't enough
I need more
I want more
I want the sharp pain gone
They don't even seem to help
Its almost as bad as heartbreak
It will only last longer
Morphine is what i need
Morphine is what i want
Morphine will kill the sharp pain
I would almost be addicted if I had morphine
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Almost addicted

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:38:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I need more
I want more
I want the sharp pain gone
Some days its worse then others
Its the last thing I feel before reaching the stars
Its the first thing I feel when I breathe in the morning air
Its gripping me more each day
Tearing into my skin
Making me cry out louder each time
I need more
I want more
I really want the sharp pain gone
Wanting to ease my pain
I wonder if drinking would help
The pain pills I have now aren't enough
I need more
I want more
I want the sharp pain gone
They don't even seem to help
Its almost as bad as heartbreak
It will only last longer
Morphine is what i need
Morphine is what i want
Morphine will kill the sharp pain
I would almost be addicted if I had morphine

Copyright © stonedraider23 ... [ 2004-11-04 19:38:16]
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Re: Almost addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:44:48 PM AEST
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Don't know what kindda pain u have but my son has to take morphine and it's hell if he ever gets without it but at least it helps the pain from a degenerative bone disease.
Hope u find your releif.
luv, huggs, pryaer,
emy

Re: Almost addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:53:13 PM AEST
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i wanna be ur drug but not in a bad way,i wanna be ur life drug
lol,later lover

savedbydeath

Re: Almost addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:53:48 PM AEST
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No, I was on something that starts with a K..the doc says that nothing really kills the pain..just kind of dulls you're thinking..makes you drowsy so you don't care..so I told him to call them brain killers.lol..great write. Hope your pain leaves soon...

Re: Almost addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:23:46 PM AEST
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sometimes the solution is worse than the problem in some aspects.

Re: Almost addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:39:41 AM AEST
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i hope that your pain eases for you, a well expressed write of desperation,

takecare,

pixie xx

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