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Together
Contributed by
tWiStLe
on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When we were together,
my heart was racing,
my blood was pulsing,
my brain was ticking,
my lungs were breathing,
my eyes were darting,
my body was heating,
Then she came along......
you left me for her.
My haert started breaking,
my blood started draining,
my brain started to jumble,
my lungs started constricting,
my eyes started crying,
my body started aching,
he had left.....
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tWiStLe
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2004-11-04 19:14:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Together
(User Rating: 1 ) by Delusions on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:41:43 PM AEST (User
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I really like this one aye... and i can soooo totally relate to it! bugger aye... but its very well written n I cant wait to read the rest of em!!! U drag me in n make me suffer while I wait for the rest... hehe!!! ~cRuNcHiE~ |
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Re: Together
(User Rating: 1 ) by unforgiven on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:00:28 AM AEST (User
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nice poem sweety!!!.....was waiting for u to post some on here so everyone else could see ur talent like i know u hav in u.....glad ur sharing it with the rest of the world!!! mwa huni |
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