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No Turning Back
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:49:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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" No Turning Back "
The full moon is yellow and fades another day
It happened in the darkness as my fear gives way
Daytime is so full of productive busy life
Nighttime fills my heart with so much strife
Nighttime used to be socially enjoyable
But since what happened to me, I am no longer able
My senses at night are really heightened
I now sit in my room totally frightened
I heard him seconds before he attacked
Him stabbing me was a brutal act
He took my wallet as I laid to die
I could not make a sound not even cry
He took his knife and cut my skirt
What he did next really hurt
While he was doing me, I no longer wanted to be alive
God’s Angel’s of mercy gave me power to survive
I no longer live with any emotion
I only go through all the motions
I am hateful, angry, no one to trust
Since this happened to me, I can’t adjust
I often think of dying as a way out
I quickly force myself onto another route
This awful crime is forever part of my life
The evil person wins if I pick up that knife
I will live with this for the rest of my years
When the sun goes down I really feel my fears
I receive loving support from those I love
Here on earth and up above
They give to me the strength I lack
I must move forward now, No Turning Back!!!!!
James L. McHenry
Copyright ©2004 By James L. McHenry
Copyright ©2004 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright ©2004 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright ©2004 HeartFelt TM
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: No Turning Back
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by leonafox on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:42:35 PM AEST
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| This is good poetry. |
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Re: No Turning Back
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:54:34 PM AEST
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I've never had a chance
to read one of your poems.
This is really something.
I will have to read it again!
--Mothy |
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Re: No Turning Back
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by destinyfate on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:54:38 PM AEST
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My heart goes out for your friend.You just told a very painful story with words easil read and words that reaches out and grabs the readers attention.
Tonya |
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Re: No Turning Back
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:40:51 AM AEST
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an amzingly written sad write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: No Turning Back
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by happybunnyfan on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 12:21:56 AM AEST
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sad but good, u told it very well.
i really feel sorry for your friend.
*hugs* to her
and you
happybunnyfan *hugs* |
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Re: No Turning Back
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:23:36 AM AEST
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My tears are for your friend. How horrific for someone to do such a terrible thing. The world can be such an evil place. Karma is upon those who do evil. My love to your friend.
A hard poem for you to write you
So very sad
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: No Turning Back
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:15:56 PM AEST
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| oh my god, that was an awesome poem. I love it so much, and it goes through all of the emotions that somebody in that position would feel. I really like how you described everything amongst the poem. Overall it was a VERY well written poem. I have to read more ^.^ |
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