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Array ( [sid] => 70146 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GOODBYE [time] => 2004-11-04 16:40:37 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => im killing myself staying alive
im a failor, with no chance to survie
drugs, were my only friend
a friend, there till the end
at night i go to my room and lock the door
simply, to hurt myself even more
close my eyes to hold in the tears
only to hear the voices within
yelling and screaming, calling my name
your no good, you bring nothing but shame
heard so loud, cries of pain
taunting, so taunting, driving me insane
no one loves you, you piece of *****
worthless and no good. your a misfit
the blade strikes my wrist
DAD... thats for all the birthdays you missed
ALLEN... thats for all the girls beside me you kissed
and again the blood trickes down
MOM... thats for all the times I let you down
my drops of blood creat a image on the floor
a world, thats cold and bare without a sound
I'm trapped in this hell and I'm the creator
no one can help me, there is no savior
I dont diserve to live
there is nothing i wouldnt give
to DIE
DIE a word that once scared me
DIE a word that will set me free from this misery
do I dare take me life?
the pain would soon be gone
how my heart aches of pain
if only you knew
do I dare use a rope?
from under me you would kick the chair
life did cheat me the hurt to much to bare
do I dare use a gun
place it to the side of mmy head
does this mean the voices have won?
I guess so
I just wanna de
dont ask why
DONT MISS ME
BECAUSE
I WONT MISS YOU [comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 61 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
GOODBYE

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 04:40:37 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



im killing myself staying alive
im a failor, with no chance to survie
drugs, were my only friend
a friend, there till the end
at night i go to my room and lock the door
simply, to hurt myself even more
close my eyes to hold in the tears
only to hear the voices within
yelling and screaming, calling my name
your no good, you bring nothing but shame
heard so loud, cries of pain
taunting, so taunting, driving me insane
no one loves you, you piece of *****
worthless and no good. your a misfit
the blade strikes my wrist
DAD... thats for all the birthdays you missed
ALLEN... thats for all the girls beside me you kissed
and again the blood trickes down
MOM... thats for all the times I let you down
my drops of blood creat a image on the floor
a world, thats cold and bare without a sound
I'm trapped in this hell and I'm the creator
no one can help me, there is no savior
I dont diserve to live
there is nothing i wouldnt give
to DIE
DIE a word that once scared me
DIE a word that will set me free from this misery
do I dare take me life?
the pain would soon be gone
how my heart aches of pain
if only you knew
do I dare use a rope?
from under me you would kick the chair
life did cheat me the hurt to much to bare
do I dare use a gun
place it to the side of mmy head
does this mean the voices have won?
I guess so
I just wanna de
dont ask why
DONT MISS ME
BECAUSE
I WONT MISS YOU




Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2004-11-04 16:40:37]
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Re: GOODBYE (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:02:47 PM AEST
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this broke my heart so very sad
Michelle




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