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Array ( [sid] => 70131 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gaurdian Angel [time] => 2004-11-04 15:00:47 [hometext] => I am 14 in 7th grade and when I had my mom read this she couldn't beleive I wrote it This is 1 of the 10 poem I have written [bodytext] => Quietly moving through your room,
Like a cat stoking its prey,
Not to worry,
I won't hurt you,
Am only here to help,
To guide,
To inspire,
And give you internal happiness.
Listening to all you say,
Trying to correct you when you are wrong,
Putting good ideas in your head,
Taking out the bad,
Replacing them with hope and love.
My wings are silk feathers moving swiftly,
Covered in all white with a glossy finish.
Shining as if I am a star.
Coming from the heavens above.
My silky blonde hair,
Perfectly laid beneath my halo.
Unheard,
Unscene to those who don't beleive,
But those who do,
See clearly,
Hear easily.
When the wind blows think of me,
Humming wonderful music.
Gently pushing you forward,
So you can acheive your goals.
The only way I can touch,
Is to become one with the wind. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 62 [informant] => BrookeStar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

Gaurdian Angel

Contributed by BrookeStar on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:00:47 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Quietly moving through your room,
Like a cat stoking its prey,
Not to worry,
I won't hurt you,
Am only here to help,
To guide,
To inspire,
And give you internal happiness.
Listening to all you say,
Trying to correct you when you are wrong,
Putting good ideas in your head,
Taking out the bad,
Replacing them with hope and love.
My wings are silk feathers moving swiftly,
Covered in all white with a glossy finish.
Shining as if I am a star.
Coming from the heavens above.
My silky blonde hair,
Perfectly laid beneath my halo.
Unheard,
Unscene to those who don't beleive,
But those who do,
See clearly,
Hear easily.
When the wind blows think of me,
Humming wonderful music.
Gently pushing you forward,
So you can acheive your goals.
The only way I can touch,
Is to become one with the wind.

Copyright © BrookeStar ... [ 2004-11-04 15:00:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Gaurdian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:03:54 PM AEST
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Wow!! This is a great piece of work!!
Your Mom must be very proud of you. Kepp posting and definitely keep on writing...

Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net..
Jenni

Re: Gaurdian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by avanottingham on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:46:26 PM AEST
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Wonderful imagery! Usually poems that do not rhyme fail to hold my attention, but this poem was so lyrical in it's essence I could not help but love it!

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