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Array ( [sid] => 70103 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cut lip. [time] => 2004-11-04 10:36:54 [hometext] => Ok, well this happened today. I think it was just more than a game to her. I dunno. Maybe I should have just thumped her… Please comment on this one. [bodytext] => Cut lip.
Blood drips,
On the tissue inside.
But the taste is alright.

Cut lip.
Lip kicked.
It feels painful.
Leaving my head dull.

Cut lip.
Assault inflict.
Why are you laughing?
You little *****!

Cut lip.
Lost grip.
But too weak to fight,
When she grabs my wrists tight…
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 65 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Cut lip.

Contributed by deathdrop on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:36:54 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Cut lip.
Blood drips,
On the tissue inside.
But the taste is alright.

Cut lip.
Lip kicked.
It feels painful.
Leaving my head dull.

Cut lip.
Assault inflict.
Why are you laughing?
You little *****!

Cut lip.
Lost grip.
But too weak to fight,
When she grabs my wrists tight…

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-11-04 10:36:54]
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Re: Cut lip. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:39:20 AM AEST
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what a cow, in my opinion yes you should have hit her back, thats what bullies are scared of, people standing up to them, if you do stand up to her there is a good chance she will back off, very angery and pained write,
takecare,

pixie xx

Re: Cut lip. (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:44:48 AM AEST
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Rosie,
I am so sorry that this happened. I can relate this with my dad... but it is a great write... pm me... you always know I'm here for you... check out my poem, its right above yours!
take care, and keep your head up high,
Deanna

Re: Cut lip. (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:19:20 PM AEST
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Very good write. The thought of women being abusive to men never crossed by mind!
Instead of thumping her---Dump her!

Re: Cut lip. (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 03:04:36 PM AEST
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Rosie...
Hey there... yeah... you should have thumped her... she'd think twice b4 she touched u again LOL! Sometimes that's the way you have to be to make ppl understand you...
good wirte... take care...
~Donna~

Re: Cut lip. (User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:33:39 PM AEST
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Excellent write. Your words are almost lyrical, and you do an amazing job with the way it flows... It's very creative.

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