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Array ( [sid] => 70079 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Divine Imperfection [time] => 2004-11-03 23:55:32 [hometext] => 'Why do we think that the mess technology has made of our world can be fixed by more technology?' - George Carlin [bodytext] => Machines are flawed because Man is flawed
Man is flawed because God is flawed

Machines are not the hope of the future
They are flawed like their creators
Do not trust the machines
They cannot help you
Just as we cannot help ourselves
Just as God cannot help any of us

Machines are flawed because Man is flawed
Man is flawed because God is flawed

Machines are not the hope of the future
Nothing can change what we are
Do not put your faith into this divine imperfection
Imperfection creates imperfection
Imperfection spreads imperfection

Machines are flawed because Man is flawed
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The Divine Imperfection

Contributed by Onslaught on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:55:32 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Machines are flawed because Man is flawed
Man is flawed because God is flawed

Machines are not the hope of the future
They are flawed like their creators
Do not trust the machines
They cannot help you
Just as we cannot help ourselves
Just as God cannot help any of us

Machines are flawed because Man is flawed
Man is flawed because God is flawed

Machines are not the hope of the future
Nothing can change what we are
Do not put your faith into this divine imperfection
Imperfection creates imperfection
Imperfection spreads imperfection

Machines are flawed because Man is flawed
Man is flawed because God is flawed

Copyright © Onslaught ... [ 2004-11-03 23:55:32]
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Re: The Divine Imperfection (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:21:08 AM AEST
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I disagree. God is not flawed. He purposed man's fall into imperfection for a perfect reason. Read my poem: " With good purpose " - if you want to know the reason. Or, read: Col. 1:16. Also, sorta as a warning: Rom. 9: 20 thru 24. Ok poem, although flawed in doctrine, causes one to think.

Re: The Divine Imperfection (User Rating: 1 )
by Onslaught on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 01:08:24 PM AEST
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Thanks for your opinion, but I think in all actuality we are probably both wrong, but only because we don't really know. But I will refer to your poem, and if you want to see where I am coming from read my poem - 'Wir Sind Vergessen'.

Re: The Divine Imperfection (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:46:13 PM AEST
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i agree! keep up the awesome work, you write the best poems!

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