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Array ( [sid] => 70073 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Looking For The Fall [time] => 2004-11-03 22:42:55 [hometext] => this poem sucks [bodytext] => I have spent my whole life

Looking for the fall

The one that I feel would

Put an end to them all

And I could finally just be

With that right someone

Who makes me all that I am

Just to find her and make her

Fall for who I am and

I would be complete

I sometimes feel it’s you

But the timing is never right

And I don’t want to hurt you

Even if the timing will never be

I still cannot put us at risk

I would have you in my life

Anyway I can

Because I am so sure

That that right someone

Is you

But I know how

Things can get between you and me

So I will wait until

I think you are ready

Even if you will never be
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Looking For The Fall

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I have spent my whole life

Looking for the fall

The one that I feel would

Put an end to them all

And I could finally just be

With that right someone

Who makes me all that I am

Just to find her and make her

Fall for who I am and

I would be complete

I sometimes feel it’s you

But the timing is never right

And I don’t want to hurt you

Even if the timing will never be

I still cannot put us at risk

I would have you in my life

Anyway I can

Because I am so sure

That that right someone

Is you

But I know how

Things can get between you and me

So I will wait until

I think you are ready

Even if you will never be

Copyright Â© Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-11-03 22:42:55]
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Re: Looking For The Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:11:59 PM AEST
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Well I'd luv to see that the poem sucks, anyway this is a great as I understand what u r saying here and we all can relate in one way or the other.
Keep up the great writing.
luv, huggs, msny smiles,
emy

Re: Looking For The Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:28:42 PM AEST
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this poem far from sucks...i really like it...im sorry...

luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx

Re: Looking For The Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:28:03 AM AEST
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hey dont put your poetry down like that , as I said about the other one this poem didn't suck, very far from, you have such talent and you write some lovely, romantic poetry,

takecare
pixie xx

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