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Array ( [sid] => 70067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trapped in your nightmare [time] => 2004-11-03 22:13:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You steal me in the night
to dwell within your dreams
a haunted cold sorrounding
where satans angels sing
I know what you are thinking
I'm right inside your head
the demented thoughts start racing
when you lay down in bed
a strange sick sort of torture
a prisoner inside your mind
I rummage through the corpses
In the smoky air I'm blind
Your dark and gloomy world
is an unfit place to be
I would not come out alive
without you guiding me
I wait until you wake
rising like the sun
and dread the night time all day long
for I know whats to come [comments] => 5 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => gurlg0newr0ng [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Trapped in your nightmare

Contributed by gurlg0newr0ng on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:13:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You steal me in the night
to dwell within your dreams
a haunted cold sorrounding
where satans angels sing
I know what you are thinking
I'm right inside your head
the demented thoughts start racing
when you lay down in bed
a strange sick sort of torture
a prisoner inside your mind
I rummage through the corpses
In the smoky air I'm blind
Your dark and gloomy world
is an unfit place to be
I would not come out alive
without you guiding me
I wait until you wake
rising like the sun
and dread the night time all day long
for I know whats to come

Copyright © gurlg0newr0ng ... [ 2004-11-03 22:13:57]
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Re: Trapped in your nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by girltranscended on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:29:34 PM AEST
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This is really cool, good job!

Re: Trapped in your nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by happybunnyfan on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:23:00 AM AEST
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great write your very good

Re: Trapped in your nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:31:18 AM AEST
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wow, amazing, the flow was brilliant,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Trapped in your nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:59:40 AM AEST
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Its so nice to see a masters creation for us to read and feel. I am so honored to be amongst such great talented poets. Thank You for sharing yourself and especially your poetic talent with myself and many other readers of fine poetry. Your reading fan, MickeyPigKnuckles :o)

Re: Trapped in your nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by destinyfate on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 02:07:17 PM AEST
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Wow this is truelly a great poem.

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