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Array ( [sid] => 70014 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In the Middle [time] => 2004-11-03 16:25:48 [hometext] => This was when i fell for two guys at the same time.heres to you nick and dj. Not even my closest friends could help me outta this mess! [bodytext] => Caught between
One love or another.
Both seem to be
More than a brother.
But life is long,
And choices wrong.
They make me want to
Duck and cover.
The result is inevitable
And I can’t escape
Pain and sorrow
It’s my fate.
My life is painful
Can’t you see?
Can’t you see
The pain you’re causing me?
I can’t see the answer to this endless life.
All I see is sorrow, grief, and strife.
My life just keeps going when I want it to end.
All I ever wanted or needed was a friend.
Someone who could encourage me to
Keep trying when I felt like I should quit.
But my friend wouldn’t let me.
That answer’s not fit.
My heart would be happy because her in it I’d keep,
But my heart is broken and I can’t help but weep.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 22 [informant] => crazylady [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

In the Middle

Contributed by crazylady on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:25:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Caught between
One love or another.
Both seem to be
More than a brother.
But life is long,
And choices wrong.
They make me want to
Duck and cover.
The result is inevitable
And I can’t escape
Pain and sorrow
It’s my fate.
My life is painful
Can’t you see?
Can’t you see
The pain you’re causing me?
I can’t see the answer to this endless life.
All I see is sorrow, grief, and strife.
My life just keeps going when I want it to end.
All I ever wanted or needed was a friend.
Someone who could encourage me to
Keep trying when I felt like I should quit.
But my friend wouldn’t let me.
That answer’s not fit.
My heart would be happy because her in it I’d keep,
But my heart is broken and I can’t help but weep.

Copyright Â© crazylady ... [ 2004-11-03 16:25:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In the Middle (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:36:44 PM AEST
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Given two choices I would
pick the worse.

--Mothy

Re: In the Middle (User Rating: 1 )
by crazylady on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:43:45 PM AEST
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lol. im over both of them now. im new to your-poetry.com and so i figured id post some of my favorite works. i want as many opinions on all of thme as i can so i can improve my writing. i want 2 b a writer when i grow up. so im already practicing. thanx for your comments!

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