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Array ( [sid] => 69995 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paying For My Sin [time] => 2004-11-03 14:52:47 [hometext] => This poem is about a girl named Brenda whom I will love forever, even tho she is now in Arizona and I am stuck in Oklahoma. [bodytext] => She has only been gone now for a short time
But I feel like I am losing my mind
I knew I would miss her when she went away
I wish I had fell to my knees and begged her to stay
All these people around trying to take her place
I wish they would just get out of my face
She is the only one that can ever heal this pain
I have nothing left to lose and everything to gain
Minutes seem like hours and hours like days
She was definitely not just a phase
I know I will have to move on and be strong
I wish she would see, here is where she belongs
She spoke perfect words, wrote perfect poems, perfect laugh, perfect face
I keep trying to be happy and get back in place
For all the pain I have caused others in my life
I will pay every day until she is my wife
I belong to her, my body, my mind, and my soul
All this hurt is starting to take it's toll
I will never forget her, never would even try
All I want to do now is cry
I want my mind to just die
I can't keep living this aweful lie
Can't anyone even tell me why?
Do we have to really ever say goodbye?
Take me out of this state of mind, for I am blind
She is my soul mate, and you only have one
This world will be cold now, no more sun
I love her and can't say it enough
From now on loving anyone else will be tough
This is over, finished, the end
I am now paying for all my sin [comments] => 2 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Sinzx7 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Paying For My Sin

Contributed by Sinzx7 on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 02:52:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



She has only been gone now for a short time
But I feel like I am losing my mind
I knew I would miss her when she went away
I wish I had fell to my knees and begged her to stay
All these people around trying to take her place
I wish they would just get out of my face
She is the only one that can ever heal this pain
I have nothing left to lose and everything to gain
Minutes seem like hours and hours like days
She was definitely not just a phase
I know I will have to move on and be strong
I wish she would see, here is where she belongs
She spoke perfect words, wrote perfect poems, perfect laugh, perfect face
I keep trying to be happy and get back in place
For all the pain I have caused others in my life
I will pay every day until she is my wife
I belong to her, my body, my mind, and my soul
All this hurt is starting to take it's toll
I will never forget her, never would even try
All I want to do now is cry
I want my mind to just die
I can't keep living this aweful lie
Can't anyone even tell me why?
Do we have to really ever say goodbye?
Take me out of this state of mind, for I am blind
She is my soul mate, and you only have one
This world will be cold now, no more sun
I love her and can't say it enough
From now on loving anyone else will be tough
This is over, finished, the end
I am now paying for all my sin




Copyright © Sinzx7 ... [ 2004-11-03 14:52:47]
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Re: Paying For My Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:30:43 PM AEST
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this is such an emotional poem
i like it a lot
great job


Re: Paying For My Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:41:39 PM AEST
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why does love cost us so much? a heartfelt poem, a good write.




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