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Array ( [sid] => 6999 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Your Innocence... or Lack Of [time] => 2002-11-19 02:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What I hold of yours
is a memorable beauty
The thought of you
will always be soothing
What I took from you
will keep me in your memory
But the first chick you ever had sex with is not how I want you to remember me
We both feel good
after everytime we......
We've both fealt how good it can be.
But for me,
I always end up wanting more..
Not physically, because I get so much it makes me sore.
But I always end up wanting more.
I mean maybe if we could atleast hold eachother
Maybe I could sense more than just flesh against my skin
But it's probably just me..
Maybe love is just a feeling I cant feel again.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 32 [informant] => RavenousDesire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Your Innocence... or Lack Of

Contributed by RavenousDesire on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

What I hold of yours
is a memorable beauty
The thought of you
will always be soothing
What I took from you
will keep me in your memory
But the first chick you ever had sex with is not how I want you to remember me
We both feel good
after everytime we......
We've both fealt how good it can be.
But for me,
I always end up wanting more..
Not physically, because I get so much it makes me sore.
But I always end up wanting more.
I mean maybe if we could atleast hold eachother
Maybe I could sense more than just flesh against my skin
But it's probably just me..
Maybe love is just a feeling I cant feel again.

Copyright © RavenousDesire ... [ 2002-11-19 02:00:00]
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Re: Your Innocence... or Lack Of (User Rating: 1 )
by fayeelizibeth on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:19:48 AM AEST
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oh- this is so perfect- it just captures the emotions that come when love seems to leave and sex takes over- sex isn't love, and no one should expect it to be- but when they come together it is so beautiful- it's like a high- then the love dissapears and everything seems lost- i hope love returns to you! it finally did for me- it's not lost- just hiding...

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