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Array ( [sid] => 69985 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want to melt and disappear. [time] => 2004-11-03 13:43:11 [hometext] => This ain’t a suicide poem. It’s a I WANT TO DISAPPEAR poem. I know people on this site care and I’m thankful for that. In this the people that care are the ones in my life… I’m not thankful to them. [bodytext] => My blood’s pumping.
These thoughts are too much.
I can’t keep on coping.
When I feel this blunt.

I can’t keep on trying.
When it’s so painful inside.
My past still lives,
And there’s NO WHERE to hide.

I live inside night mares,
And abuse and pain.
I live inside memories,
Of self-harm and stains.

I’ve lived for too long.
And died as result.
I’ve told on the abuse,
But it happening’s my fault…

I can’t block things away.
When I don’t wanna be here.
It’s so my easier to just not stay.
And melt and disappear.

They tell me they care for me.
Do you know how much that hurts?
They say they were worried when I ran away.
When I broke and burst.

They say I should go to therapy.
They say that they care.
But all I want to do is BLEED.
And melt and disappear.
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I want to melt and disappear.

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:43:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My blood’s pumping.
These thoughts are too much.
I can’t keep on coping.
When I feel this blunt.

I can’t keep on trying.
When it’s so painful inside.
My past still lives,
And there’s NO WHERE to hide.

I live inside night mares,
And abuse and pain.
I live inside memories,
Of self-harm and stains.

I’ve lived for too long.
And died as result.
I’ve told on the abuse,
But it happening’s my fault…

I can’t block things away.
When I don’t wanna be here.
It’s so my easier to just not stay.
And melt and disappear.

They tell me they care for me.
Do you know how much that hurts?
They say they were worried when I ran away.
When I broke and burst.

They say I should go to therapy.
They say that they care.
But all I want to do is BLEED.
And melt and disappear.

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-11-03 13:43:11]
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Re: I want to melt and disappear. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:44:57 PM AEST
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i think that we all wish to melt away sometimes, I know i do, quite often . this was another very emotional write, like me, you have a very forward way in your writing, you say it as it is, you style is great. I hope that one day you can find true peace and happiness,

takecare

pixie xx

Re: I want to melt and disappear. (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 03:10:27 PM AEST
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Rosie,
Hey... I am so sorry for your pain my dear... and YOU know that I know what you are feeling... you are NOT alone, and I know you know that... just please... keep your head up and try. Try to beat and pry your way out of this like I know you can. and you right... you DO have people that care on this sight. and I'm one of the many... :)
take care,
Deanna

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