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Array ( [sid] => 69958 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Messy White [time] => 2004-11-03 10:51:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Life without you is raw
not harmony
or pieces to empty rhythm
I turn
investigated fully
making wild smears of screams absurd

Meanest shard black they see
A psychedelic picture of me
Drug and balance
smoke from time
Electric passion drunk
on words that I write

It creates art that only I would like
with you as my music
on a canvas messy white
Sometimes surreal
Never angry appear
Deeply to feel
the things that I fear

Days are time
from smoke that I turn
into wasted art
of passion absurd
Drug and balance
are empty as life
With you as my music
on a canvas messy white
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Red_October [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Messy White

Contributed by Red_October on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 10:51:58 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Life without you is raw
not harmony
or pieces to empty rhythm
I turn
investigated fully
making wild smears of screams absurd

Meanest shard black they see
A psychedelic picture of me
Drug and balance
smoke from time
Electric passion drunk
on words that I write

It creates art that only I would like
with you as my music
on a canvas messy white
Sometimes surreal
Never angry appear
Deeply to feel
the things that I fear

Days are time
from smoke that I turn
into wasted art
of passion absurd
Drug and balance
are empty as life
With you as my music
on a canvas messy white

Copyright © Red_October ... [ 2004-11-03 10:51:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Messy White (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:05:14 AM AEST
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aww Tiffany, this is a very emotional write, you have written it with such style, great flow,

takecare

pixie xx

Re: Messy White (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:16:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful use of words...

blessed be
sirena

Re: Messy White (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:39:31 AM AEST
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A colorful exlposion of words... I love your writing style!

Re: Messy White (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:40:24 AM AEST
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Deep & thought provoking. Great work :)

Re: Messy White (User Rating: 1 )
by Nardo on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:09:03 PM AEST
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WOW!
I don't know what to say but the visions of beauty and chaos fill my mind.
GREAT JOB!

Re: Messy White (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 04:05:56 PM AEST
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wonderful...

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