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In The End
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:59:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Feelings that are forbidden-
Are only emotions left hidden-
Behind a shroud to hide the pain-
As life holds nothing for one to gain…
Walls that bind a heart broken-
Are filled with words left unspoken-
And truth becomes nothing more than a lie-
For the soul is left alone only to die…
One must chance to take the dare-
And always choose love with care-
For nothing more seems so sad-
Than to sit and remember a love, once had…
In time a heart learns to heal-
And again loves warmth it will feel-
For time and love travel hand in hand-
And in the end together they will stand…
11-2-2004
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2004-11-02 21:59:27]
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Re: In The End
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:06:02 PM AEST
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Very, very wonderful! Nicely done.
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Re: In The End
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:26:04 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: In The End
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:39:40 PM AEST
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I wish I could speed up time because it is awfully cold inside of me.
Rita |
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Re: In The End
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:06:29 PM AEST
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You have a gift, my friend. A talent for evoking the deepest
of emotions from your readers. Well done!!
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