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Fooled
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:45:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't see straight, my eyes are a blur.
I know I should stop, and I've tried.
But it wont be gone until I have died.
I'm sorry that I didn't turn out like you wanted.
All your dreams, and wishes are not in reach.
And I won't be giving the one giving the valadictorion speech.
All that they will remember of me is that I was insane, little do they know your to blame.
Everyone thought you were so cool but you, you had them all fooled.
Sweet, they called you, and I agree if a bloody nose were sweet, you would be.
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2004-11-02 21:45:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fooled
(User Rating: 1 ) by -Lord-Vince-Black- on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:36:21 AM AEST (User
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Full of hate,
That's clear
But you don't let it notice too much..
Was a plesure reading your poem..
Keep up the work..
Have a nice life,
Lord Vince Black |
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Re: Fooled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 01:31:52 AM AEST (User
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I can relate, Great Write !! |
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Re: Fooled
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 02:10:00 AM AEST (User
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a very sad moving write, good poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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