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Can i give up?
Contributed by
AdamChantell
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:49:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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No longer the gentleman
For everything is wrong
Everything makes me weaker
Never again to be strong
My ears hurt so much
From the hatefull things you said
I no longer want to listen
My tears start to shed
My eyes are going blind
I can no longer see
I wonder what it is going to take
Is there anyone that cares about me
I have no heard "i love you"
It's been so long
Love now only hurts
It used to make me strong
Pain is my only true friend
It's actually been there for me
Even though i didn't want it
It still wanted me
I'm tired of always hurting
Tired of writting about my pain
If there is a god somewhere up there
Please show me a better way
[in this poem the 5th stanza is from my other poem called "not like me"]
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Re: Can i give up?
(User Rating: 1 ) by AdamChantell on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 04:01:54 PM AEST (User
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I have no heard "i love you"
should be
i have not heard "i love you" |
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Re: Can i give up?
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 05:13:04 PM AEST (User
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my ideas..
No longer the gentleman
For everything is wrong
Everything makes me weaker
Never again to be strong
My ears hurt so much
From the hatefull things you said
I no longer want to listen
And tears I start to shed
I must be going blind
For no longer can I see
what will it take I ask,
until someone cares for me?
I have not heard I love you
in oh so very long
Love now only hurts
when It used to make me strong
Pain is my only true friend
It's actually been there for me
Even though i didn't want it
It still wanted me
I'm tired of always hurting
Tired of writting about my pain
If there is a god somewhere up there
Please show me a better way
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Re: Can i give up?
(User Rating: 1 ) by AdamChantell on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:35:49 PM AEST (User
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thank you |
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