Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	01-June 09:36:21 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 69852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Voices of your memorie [time] => 2004-11-02 14:47:20 [hometext] => This is a dark poem, just like almost all the rest. But still I think it's one of my better poems.. Comment what you think about is, I wanna know.. [bodytext] => He's sitting in a corner
Writing, wondering, thinking
Listening to the voices in his head
Writing down what him is told
Writing down not to forget his pain
The pain he keeps in his heart
His red heart of blood
Of the wounds of his pain
Little cuts in his heart for the pain
he wants to cry it out
To clear his heart that's filled
Filled with the graves of his thoughts
Things to remember his pain
The pain of his life
That's almost not worth it to live for
He doesn't want it
He hates it
But yet, he doesn't end it
Why?
Because he could be happy
He has dreams
Dreams of a better life
A life without pain
Where he has no voices in his head
That make him think about
Love, hate, murder, friendship
He hates the voices for making him think
But yet he loves them
Because he knows their wright
But doesn't want to admit it
So everytime when he's depressif
He sits in a corner
Writing, listening to the voices he love
creating another grave
for another painly memorie
Thet cuts in my heart... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 13 [informant] => -Lord-Vince-Black- [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Voices of your memorie

Contributed by -Lord-Vince-Black- on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 02:47:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He's sitting in a corner
Writing, wondering, thinking
Listening to the voices in his head
Writing down what him is told
Writing down not to forget his pain
The pain he keeps in his heart
His red heart of blood
Of the wounds of his pain
Little cuts in his heart for the pain
he wants to cry it out
To clear his heart that's filled
Filled with the graves of his thoughts
Things to remember his pain
The pain of his life
That's almost not worth it to live for
He doesn't want it
He hates it
But yet, he doesn't end it
Why?
Because he could be happy
He has dreams
Dreams of a better life
A life without pain
Where he has no voices in his head
That make him think about
Love, hate, murder, friendship
He hates the voices for making him think
But yet he loves them
Because he knows their wright
But doesn't want to admit it
So everytime when he's depressif
He sits in a corner
Writing, listening to the voices he love
creating another grave
for another painly memorie
Thet cuts in my heart...

Copyright © -Lord-Vince-Black- ... [ 2004-11-02 14:47:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Voices of your memorie (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 02:57:43 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I loved it.

Excellent write
on the inner thoughts.

I hope you will watch
your typos, man.
The Poetry Clones
will regard you as inferior
just for that, neverminding
the power of your words.
I've seen it happen
to many great poets.

--Mothy

Re: Voices of your memorie (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:01:08 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow this is a really good poem.. you have expressed yourself well.. sometimes the voice of inner pain surley comes through..

Great job

peace and hope
*JENNA*

Re: Voices of your memorie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:29:52 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I liked it... I wish it had a tiny bit more rhythem in it but your doing good... keep it up.

Re: Voices of your memorie (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:52:42 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

well done
Michelle

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com