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Forgotten
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 02:14:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Paralyzed… Lying in a pool of rejection.
Waiting… Bleeding in a candy-cane dream.
Falling… I’ve failed and now it’s all gone.
Stuck in this world… this world without hope.
Breathing this air… breathing without reason.
Dying on my own… on my own because you left me.
Grieving this way… this way for all eternity.
I am the vampire of self-ruin.
And I’m the archangel of my own demise.
I’ve wasted my time and I’ve wasted yours too.
I’ve been here so long, just waiting for you.
You don’t even know because your not even here.
I’ve been this way forever… this way forever more.
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surge_joebot
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2004-11-02 14:14:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 ) by theMoth on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 03:41:25 PM AEST (User
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Bleeding in a candy-cane dream
is a cool line.
Yeah, it's a nice piece
of work.
--Mothy |
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Re: Forgotten
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:28:00 PM AEST (User
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I liked the image of the candy cane... but I don't get the vampire...thing.... cause...um... your not a vampire. |
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