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The Folly of the First Little Pig
Contributed by
butterat_zool
on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:56:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Cocksure and tempting fate,
you paint the devil on the wall
of your straw house,
bastion of ineptitude,
testament to glory if only in that
it’s survived the gentle eastward wind
of this green spring morning,
as evil incarnate blows through the wall
and snatches you up / proves you wrong,
crumbling your ---- house
to straw and mud in one fell swoop.
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2004-11-02 12:56:35]
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Re: The Folly of the First Little Pig
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by wray on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:18:37 AM AEST
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| How morbid, to so distort what was meant to be a lighthearted kids' story! Good job anyway, wish I had the patience to write with your level of thoughtfulness. |
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Re: The Folly of the First Little Pig
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by Blackevar on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 12:58:37 PM AEST
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This is brilliant well done an excellent slant.
Very impressed! |
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Re: The Folly of the First Little Pig
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th April 2014 @ 10:02:33 PM AEST
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| lol! hugs n' love nessa |
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