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Array ( [sid] => 69817 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It hurts but I can't kill my-self. [time] => 2004-11-02 10:41:46 [hometext] => Here’s some thing I wrote in English today. I was so depressed. And then at the end of the lesson my teacher told me to stop my writing in class ‘coz I won’t lean any thing, and I got really irritated by that… Please take a look at this. [bodytext] => Lunch time has gone.
This pain’s unbearable.
I feel so insecure.
I feel so vulnerable.

I want to fall down in the corner,
And then eternally rest.
No more pointless trying.
No more feeling depressed.
I NEED this lift out of here.
I NEED to slit my wrist.
I NEED to simply disappear!
But it HURTS ‘coz I know I’ll be missed.
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It hurts but I can't kill my-self.

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:41:46 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Lunch time has gone.
This pain’s unbearable.
I feel so insecure.
I feel so vulnerable.

I want to fall down in the corner,
And then eternally rest.
No more pointless trying.
No more feeling depressed.
I NEED this lift out of here.
I NEED to slit my wrist.
I NEED to simply disappear!
But it HURTS ‘coz I know I’ll be missed.

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-11-02 10:41:46]
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Re: It hurts but I can't kill my-self. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:46:59 AM AEST
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i am glad that you cant kill yourself, you would be greatly missed, also you show you have strength in your writes, dig your heels in and dont let depression and thoughts of suicide beat you, I am right beside you in your fight,
well expressd write btw
takecare
pixie xx

Re: It hurts but I can't kill my-self. (User Rating: 1 )
by kitty_girl on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:11:19 AM AEST
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well writen
come to chat room one time im going now wonna come????/
kitty girlxxx

Re: It hurts but I can't kill my-self. (User Rating: 1 )
by kitty_girl on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:29:14 AM AEST
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are u coming to chat room its on this site its under community?
come on please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kitty girlxxx

Re: It hurts but I can't kill my-self. (User Rating: 1 )
by philxcool on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:04:51 PM AEST
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We've all been there...

Re: It hurts but I can't kill my-self. (User Rating: 1 )
by Nicole_Rahaman on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 01:58:18 PM AEST
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Hey Girl!

Love the last line.... You will be missed... So will your writes...

I wondered why I havent heard from you for a while... I see that you have made some improvement and that is fantastic... Still here for you..

Nicole

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