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Array ( [sid] => 69795 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Incubus [time] => 2004-11-02 06:52:55 [hometext] => Ive been away for a while, and i just kind made this up it isnt all that great but please do comment :) [bodytext] => Inside a genlte prism through
A milllion thoughts consume, imbue
A shattered morrior watches fast
Wondering through the futures past

This schizm of a broken life
A complex maze inside your strife
Secluded in a shadowed wall
This Silhouette will make you fall

Pulsating like the beating drum
Shrouding round you will succumb
It draws you in a young aspirant
Then throws you out an evil tyrant

You roam the world, to draw more near
Turn more souls to ghostly fear
A virus spreads, devours lives
Just like love destroying wives

On each page my writings talk
They ramble on, begin to stalk
When ink has dried and pages scarred
Emotions will have dropped their guard

Though i speak like love is death
Use love as your every breath
Illusions are my words on page
Nothing but a theater stage [comments] => 5 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => forever_lonely [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Incubus

Contributed by forever_lonely on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:52:55 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Inside a genlte prism through
A milllion thoughts consume, imbue
A shattered morrior watches fast
Wondering through the futures past

This schizm of a broken life
A complex maze inside your strife
Secluded in a shadowed wall
This Silhouette will make you fall

Pulsating like the beating drum
Shrouding round you will succumb
It draws you in a young aspirant
Then throws you out an evil tyrant

You roam the world, to draw more near
Turn more souls to ghostly fear
A virus spreads, devours lives
Just like love destroying wives

On each page my writings talk
They ramble on, begin to stalk
When ink has dried and pages scarred
Emotions will have dropped their guard

Though i speak like love is death
Use love as your every breath
Illusions are my words on page
Nothing but a theater stage

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-11-02 06:52:55]
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Re: Incubus (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:18:43 AM AEST
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Thanks for sharing, a very nice post... I personally like the last part, "use love as your every breath" Very good.

Re: Incubus (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:37:11 AM AEST
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The last stanza is just tottaly amazing!
This is a incredibly excellent write. I love it so much.
I may just have to read it another couple of times.
For something that you just made up it is fantastic!
So much emotion....WOW

Take care
Gen xx

Re: Incubus (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:37:27 AM AEST
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This is so insightful...a wise poetic soul put to words perfect. Tiffany J. (Red_October)

Re: Incubus (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:24:59 AM AEST
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This IS great - and I'm so happy to see you posting again.

Secluded in a shadowed wall
This Silhouette will make you fall

The entire piece is terrific, but these two lines held me. I returned to them again and again. Letting go only long enough to finish the read and ponder the bravery that you employed at the end of this piece. Nicely done! I enjoyed this.

You were missed, Luke... it's nice to have you back with us
SNM

Re: Incubus (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:57:29 PM AEST
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Well you have a mature way with words..I prefer poems with feelings and deep emotions but this are still exellent x X x

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