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Array ( [sid] => 69772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want to die tonight [time] => 2004-11-01 23:56:04 [hometext] => its not what it sounds like [bodytext] => I want to die tonight

When I fall asleep

But it’s not what it seems I’m

Not disheartened

But I must tend

To my dreams

Before they leave me

Before I’m left alone again

I want to die tonight

Slip into a coma

Where it’s beautiful

Just until you return

And I can wake up and fall

Into another dream

When I look into your eyes

I’m

Waking in a masterpiece

Painted just for me

Of a hazel sky

Like the ones

Only

Found in my dreams
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I want to die tonight

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 11:56:04 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I want to die tonight

When I fall asleep

But it’s not what it seems I’m

Not disheartened

But I must tend

To my dreams

Before they leave me

Before I’m left alone again

I want to die tonight

Slip into a coma

Where it’s beautiful

Just until you return

And I can wake up and fall

Into another dream

When I look into your eyes

I’m

Waking in a masterpiece

Painted just for me

Of a hazel sky

Like the ones

Only

Found in my dreams

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-11-01 23:56:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I want to die tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:33:35 AM AEST
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Bravo this is fantastic, very well written.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: I want to die tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 12:47:05 AM AEST
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Wow... I get this. I just posted something along the same line of thought. When the dream is sooo appealing, it's impossible not to want to give yourself to it.

Well done,
SNM

Re: I want to die tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 06:13:51 AM AEST
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im glad you dont actually want to die nice ppoem it works really well
Dan666 xx

Re: I want to die tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:07:48 AM AEST
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beautifully put together,

takecare

pixie xx

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