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Array ( [sid] => 69700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Empty~ [time] => 2004-11-01 15:31:10 [hometext] => enjoy!its about my ex,i know i should move on,but what can ya do when ur in love,i hope this new guy i like alot will help my wounds heal [bodytext] => somethings aren't fare
especially when you're there
i'm trying to climb the ladder
but life's getting harder and harder

i feel horrible
i made you feels terrible
i'm deeply sorry
i try not to worry

(chorus)
i feel so empty
i am empty
do you feel empty
are you empty
i hope you get better
maybe you should climb the labber
we're empty together
i'm empty forever

best friends
can become strangers
its happening again
time is changing

a part of me wants to hold you
a part of me wants to let go
i dont know what to do
hopefully you know

i dont want to believe
i try to not to believe
i'm hoping this is a dream
nothing is what it seems

(chorus)

i'm climbing the ladder
i'm wearing your sweater
life is so much harder
but i'm still climbing

empty(4x)

i'm so empty(fading as the song ends) [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 34 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

~Empty~

Contributed by savedbydeath on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:31:10 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

somethings aren't fare
especially when you're there
i'm trying to climb the ladder
but life's getting harder and harder

i feel horrible
i made you feels terrible
i'm deeply sorry
i try not to worry

(chorus)
i feel so empty
i am empty
do you feel empty
are you empty
i hope you get better
maybe you should climb the labber
we're empty together
i'm empty forever

best friends
can become strangers
its happening again
time is changing

a part of me wants to hold you
a part of me wants to let go
i dont know what to do
hopefully you know

i dont want to believe
i try to not to believe
i'm hoping this is a dream
nothing is what it seems

(chorus)

i'm climbing the ladder
i'm wearing your sweater
life is so much harder
but i'm still climbing

empty(4x)

i'm so empty(fading as the song ends)

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2004-11-01 15:31:10]
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Re: ~Empty~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 09:00:23 PM AEST
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sweetness well i hope i can help:d thatd be great

Re: ~Empty~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ANK_1321_ERW on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 08:25:30 PM AEST
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that's sweet. it's ok to think about ex's even if there is more going on. everyone does it even if they say that they don't.

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