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Array ( [sid] => 69642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => life in perspective [time] => 2004-11-01 06:38:12 [hometext] => i wrote this last night when i realised,nothing will ever be the same..... [bodytext] => my foundation is crumbling
my truths, a lie
something so wrong, within
confusion, neverending
darkness closing in on me
i'm scared
i promised myself i wouldn't fall again
but there i go
into the rabbit hole
and there, i realised
i'm insignificant
like an ungodly speck of dust
in the universe
my happiness becomes my pain
my death, my joy
i'm not as strong as i thought i was
and i feel helpless
like there's nothing i can do
and nobody else realises it
but we're vulnerable
more defenseless than we realise
no one's invincible
and while love leaves scars covering the soul
lonliness kills more than it saves
I can't live like this [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 21 [informant] => kailadragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

life in perspective

Contributed by kailadragon on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 06:38:12 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

my foundation is crumbling
my truths, a lie
something so wrong, within
confusion, neverending
darkness closing in on me
i'm scared
i promised myself i wouldn't fall again
but there i go
into the rabbit hole
and there, i realised
i'm insignificant
like an ungodly speck of dust
in the universe
my happiness becomes my pain
my death, my joy
i'm not as strong as i thought i was
and i feel helpless
like there's nothing i can do
and nobody else realises it
but we're vulnerable
more defenseless than we realise
no one's invincible
and while love leaves scars covering the soul
lonliness kills more than it saves
I can't live like this

Copyright © kailadragon ... [ 2004-11-01 06:38:12]
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Re: life in perspective (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 06:50:11 AM AEST
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awesome poem, written with feeling and unsureness, hope you find a way to get back on track, finding the peace you want. cool poem.

Re: life in perspective (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:30:08 AM AEST
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very sad and emotional write,

takecare

pixie xx

Re: life in perspective (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 08:28:19 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this write... It's so odd how our happiness becomes our sadness... This was written so well. I look forward to reading more...

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