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Array ( [sid] => 69640 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All Hollow’s Eve [time] => 2004-11-01 04:34:31 [hometext] => well it is more like a short story but i dont have that premium thing so i hope you all dont mind if i put it here between poetry. Grtz Naijrana [bodytext] => Come little brother let us go, got to what
It is the day when they come, or so our fathers and mothers say
No no no I will not go up there little brother said
Are ye afraid they will harm ye
yes big brother have ye not listen to the stories
I say little brother the stories have been made up by people with superstition
And especially this day is the biggest superstition of all days
Yet I’m still afraid big brother
Have I ever lied to ye big brother said
Well no
Then let us go, and let us see that they are not there.
And so the 2 went up and waited there, until the clock of the church ringed twelve times.
Big brother are ye truly sure, we can still go back
Nnno lllet uuus gggo ffforth aaand sssee
Big brother you are all shaking, say the truth are ye afraid
Nno ofofcourse nnot I’m not afraid I’m like a Viking walking in an battle fearless.
Aha, sure big brother.
Ding dong ding dong.
What is that sound big brother?
It must be the bell of the church, it must be midnight now.
As midnight began
Strange noises came
Lights went on
And darkness was gone
Strange figures appear
While they were shaking from fear
I want to go out, silence you little fool
Come mother come and see they are alive why do they not flee
Well mother said I will explain that to you some other time
Why don’t you go to the merry-go-round and I will join you later
Aaa, I will join you later
Puf yes mother the daughter said
Now, the mother said while watching to the 2 living
What are 2 doing here, ye who are alive
And don’t be scared we wish no harm
Well, the little brother said my big brother here wanted to know ye ghost’s
Were true and now it seems ye all are.
I waned to know if it was superstition, made up by man to satisfy there gods or goddesses big brother said
Hm it seems ye now knows the truth the mother said
Come ye who are alive
And let me say a thing or twice
Every single religion
Has a superstition
However in every single superstition a truth can be seen
Now come and let us play.
And so the 2 brothers played from midnight until the 1st rays of the sun.
We must go now the mother said and be careful on your way back.
We will big brother said
AND we will spread it over the whole town, country and the whole world
Indeed we will little brother
Are ye sure ye will not go with us
Hahaha my little daughter it is not there time yet after many years they will come.
Goodbye the 2 brothers said
And as they waved them goodbye, there new friends went up.
I miss them already little brother said, ye don’t have to, ye always carrier them within your heart, and besides they will always be here next year
I know little brother said but that takes 1 whole year until we can see them again.
Then little close ye eyes and think about this day and ye will see them.
I believe ye big brother, and if I could do a wish, I wish it could be every day an

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All Hollow’s Eve

Contributed by naijerana on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 04:34:31 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Come little brother let us go, got to what
It is the day when they come, or so our fathers and mothers say
No no no I will not go up there little brother said
Are ye afraid they will harm ye
yes big brother have ye not listen to the stories
I say little brother the stories have been made up by people with superstition
And especially this day is the biggest superstition of all days
Yet I’m still afraid big brother
Have I ever lied to ye big brother said
Well no
Then let us go, and let us see that they are not there.
And so the 2 went up and waited there, until the clock of the church ringed twelve times.
Big brother are ye truly sure, we can still go back
Nnno lllet uuus gggo ffforth aaand sssee
Big brother you are all shaking, say the truth are ye afraid
Nno ofofcourse nnot I’m not afraid I’m like a Viking walking in an battle fearless.
Aha, sure big brother.
Ding dong ding dong.
What is that sound big brother?
It must be the bell of the church, it must be midnight now.
As midnight began
Strange noises came
Lights went on
And darkness was gone
Strange figures appear
While they were shaking from fear
I want to go out, silence you little fool
Come mother come and see they are alive why do they not flee
Well mother said I will explain that to you some other time
Why don’t you go to the merry-go-round and I will join you later
Aaa, I will join you later
Puf yes mother the daughter said
Now, the mother said while watching to the 2 living
What are 2 doing here, ye who are alive
And don’t be scared we wish no harm
Well, the little brother said my big brother here wanted to know ye ghost’s
Were true and now it seems ye all are.
I waned to know if it was superstition, made up by man to satisfy there gods or goddesses big brother said
Hm it seems ye now knows the truth the mother said
Come ye who are alive
And let me say a thing or twice
Every single religion
Has a superstition
However in every single superstition a truth can be seen
Now come and let us play.
And so the 2 brothers played from midnight until the 1st rays of the sun.
We must go now the mother said and be careful on your way back.
We will big brother said
AND we will spread it over the whole town, country and the whole world
Indeed we will little brother
Are ye sure ye will not go with us
Hahaha my little daughter it is not there time yet after many years they will come.
Goodbye the 2 brothers said
And as they waved them goodbye, there new friends went up.
I miss them already little brother said, ye don’t have to, ye always carrier them within your heart, and besides they will always be here next year
I know little brother said but that takes 1 whole year until we can see them again.
Then little close ye eyes and think about this day and ye will see them.
I believe ye big brother, and if I could do a wish, I wish it could be every day an

All Hollow’s Eve




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