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I perform vision dances
as free as the air I'll reveal
under me as I move
Star-gazing, I appeal to the moon
I paint watercolors
that dry too soon
but that's just the way I am

I care nothing for material things
I'd rather be bare
with my invisible wings
uninhibited from what you think of me
I am fragile ~ I want to stay that way
I drink my decaffinated herbal tea
as I move in harmony
with passionate wind
in my hair

This is me ~ I am surreal
I care not
about what you feel
when I am unclothed with electrical flair
I thrive in your lustful stare
and I'm quite sure you want to eat me alive
but I won't let you this time
because it's all about me...
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Red_October [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Vision Dances

Contributed by Red_October on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:28:50 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

This is me ~ I am surreal
I perform vision dances
as free as the air I'll reveal
under me as I move
Star-gazing, I appeal to the moon
I paint watercolors
that dry too soon
but that's just the way I am

I care nothing for material things
I'd rather be bare
with my invisible wings
uninhibited from what you think of me
I am fragile ~ I want to stay that way
I drink my decaffinated herbal tea
as I move in harmony
with passionate wind
in my hair

This is me ~ I am surreal
I care not
about what you feel
when I am unclothed with electrical flair
I thrive in your lustful stare
and I'm quite sure you want to eat me alive
but I won't let you this time
because it's all about me...

Copyright © Red_October ... [ 2004-11-01 02:28:50]
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Re: Vision Dances (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:07:21 AM AEST
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What struck me most about this poem is the ethereal,carefree feel you put into it. Your good choice of words makes for really beautiful poetry. :)

Re: Vision Dances (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:17:23 AM AEST
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Very beautidull writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Vision Dances (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:46:19 AM AEST
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I paint watercolours
that dry to soon-this is a beautiful line.
great poem!

Re: Vision Dances (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:39:45 AM AEST
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awesome and beautifully written leaving a hauntingly aura and feel, cool poem.

Re: Vision Dances (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:53:51 AM AEST
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WOW that was beautiful, it leaves me wanting more.

Hugs,
Jane

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