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This anger burns
Because of you
Burning the bridges
That I came from

I have no where to go
And nothing to live for
I can't run to the past anymore
That bridge was burned before
With fear I can't move forward
In the flames is my last comfort
Lost without you forever more

You pushed me to the edge
And I fell away from fear
You pushed me away
As if you didn't care
You burned the bridges
So that I could live
Without my fear
But the cost was you
And the cost was dear [comments] => 11 [counter] => 318 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Without You

Contributed by essentially9 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Without You

This anger burns
Because of you
Burning the bridges
That I came from

I have no where to go
And nothing to live for
I can't run to the past anymore
That bridge was burned before
With fear I can't move forward
In the flames is my last comfort
Lost without you forever more

You pushed me to the edge
And I fell away from fear
You pushed me away
As if you didn't care
You burned the bridges
So that I could live
Without my fear
But the cost was you
And the cost was dear

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-10-31 20:37:07]
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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:44:50 PM AEST
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very sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:05:16 PM AEST
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wow this is a great write... you can feel the pain and alot of emotions in this .. Great job

peace and hope
JENNA

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:27:50 PM AEST
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yummy this one tickles my fanny good one

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 11:28:12 PM AEST
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I hate burning bridges..

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:18:22 AM AEST
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Heavy and sad, vivid and crystal clear pictures painted, beautifully written and composed, thank you for sharing such talent. cool poem.

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:45:02 AM AEST
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emotionally written, good expression,

takecare

pixie xx

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 05:50:08 PM AEST
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Its bittersweet. I love it.
Great write.
-Isabelle

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 10:28:16 PM AEST
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How torturously sad. But beautifully expressed. Good one, E.

~Breezy

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:56:34 PM AEST
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Sadly touching....well written
Jenni

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:25:43 PM AEST
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this is pretty sad i post a few poems for you last nigt i hope like them they really mean alot to me i put alot of heart in to them more than usual

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:16:14 PM AEST
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aw that's so good! sad and good wonderful job!

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