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you always said

the lies, the pain
still haunting me

each night I pray
your life to be taken away

No more pain from your lies
my soul for you no longer
shall cry
'
You make me want to hurt you for
all the things you've said
and now all i wish you that
you were DEAD!

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WIshing you DEAD

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:41:02 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I think back to the horrible things
you always said

the lies, the pain
still haunting me

each night I pray
your life to be taken away

No more pain from your lies
my soul for you no longer
shall cry
'
You make me want to hurt you for
all the things you've said
and now all i wish you that
you were DEAD!

JENNA

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Re: WIshing you DEAD (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:48:18 PM AEST
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Very sad but I'm glad it's an old one. U discribe your feelings well.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: WIshing you DEAD (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 07:51:31 PM AEST
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wow u sure know how to describe more then just ur feelings,i've felt like that too,but also i feel bad bc i've felt like others feel bad too,good job keep up the good work

savedbydeath

Re: WIshing you DEAD (User Rating: 1 )
by VonDutchChick08 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:33:09 PM AEST
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Awesome choice of words to describe your emotions. This is truthfully an awesome poem. Keep up the writing!

Re: WIshing you DEAD (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:40:35 PM AEST
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brilliant, i loved every part of this.

Re: WIshing you DEAD (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 07:46:37 AM AEST
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a great expression and use of anger, it is good to get it out of your system, hope you have learnt to try and let go of your anger, as I find it destroys me from the inside, i am still trying to find ways oif letting it go,

great write,

takecare
pixie xx

Re: WIshing you DEAD (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:03:28 AM AEST
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I'm glad to see I can relate to someone a little. Great write

Re: WIshing you DEAD (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 07:44:45 PM AEST
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Wow, u know i've felt like this also but one must move on or get drag down to the level of the very person they hate, i see it's an older poem but none the less i understand precisely what you felt. Be carefull what you wish for. great emtional expression.

Ben

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