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So what if I can't be what you want me to be...
Is that any reason for you to turn your back, and not love me?
So what if I'm not like everyone else, maybe it's your fault, have you ever thought about that?
I'm sorry I'm not sane, but something went wrong, I've died inside from all the pain.
But don't worry mommy you wont be ashamed anymore, because the next time you see me will be on the floor, in a pool of blood, please be happy, your not ashamed of me anymore.
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Ashamed

Contributed by addicted2selfharm on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:34:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

So what if I can't be what you want me to be...
Is that any reason for you to turn your back, and not love me?
So what if I'm not like everyone else, maybe it's your fault, have you ever thought about that?
I'm sorry I'm not sane, but something went wrong, I've died inside from all the pain.
But don't worry mommy you wont be ashamed anymore, because the next time you see me will be on the floor, in a pool of blood, please be happy, your not ashamed of me anymore.

Copyright © addicted2selfharm ... [ 2004-10-31 15:34:50]
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Re: Ashamed (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:49:54 PM AEST
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No, not ashamed any more; remember?????

Re: Ashamed (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:41:42 PM AEST
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powerful and excellent write.

Re: Ashamed (User Rating: 1 )
by -Lord-Vince-Black- on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 12:39:32 AM AEST
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I must say If I where your mom,
And I had read your poems,
I couldn't be ashamed of you..
If you hurt yourself for the burning feeling inside, the feeling you have died beneath your skin,
That must be that your a loving person, a very loving person..
How can you be ashamed of that??

Have a nice life,
Lord Vince Black

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