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Array ( [sid] => 69571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => waiting [time] => 2004-10-31 14:48:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Look at me, see what u have you done to me
I’m falling, I’m drowning in eternal darkness
Forever to wait for you
To grab my hand and save me from this nightmare
Hate surrounds me and writings appear on my skin saying,” I hate you”
Pain is in my heart making a wall around it
I hear voices of regret in my head
And tears fall down
I’m fading away, I’m breaking apart
Only the pieces of my heart lay on ground
Only to wait for another day

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waiting

Contributed by the_fallen on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 02:48:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Look at me, see what u have you done to me
I’m falling, I’m drowning in eternal darkness
Forever to wait for you
To grab my hand and save me from this nightmare
Hate surrounds me and writings appear on my skin saying,” I hate you”
Pain is in my heart making a wall around it
I hear voices of regret in my head
And tears fall down
I’m fading away, I’m breaking apart
Only the pieces of my heart lay on ground
Only to wait for another day





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Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by lilracer37 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:06:57 PM AEST
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its dark, and emotional but its good,sounds like someone hurt u pretty bad, been there done that, dont worry someone will come along and save the day and make everything perfect and make u feel perfect


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:42:09 PM AEST
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A gripping piece of poetry.

--Mothy


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:58:22 PM AEST
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This piece grabbed me by the balls and wouldn't let go...very emotionaly dark...I loved it

Mason


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:46:55 PM AEST
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very well written.




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