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I’m thinking about things.
The way they’ve added up.
The strong emotions they’ve left within me.
And how I’m meant to cope now.
How I’m meant to live with the pain digging through me,
Eating away at me.
Killing me inside.
I don’t know any more.
I’m out of ideas.
All I know, is that,
This is me.
It’s who I am.
It’s what I’ve become.
I’m the girl,
That’s never gonna change.
… ‘Coz I’ll never stop cutting.
And being this stupid, quiet person over there.
Talking to people but swelling up inside,
Is just who I am.
I’m that type of person that,
When some one’s hisses out abuse in my face,
It hurts me.
… And it makes me want to cry.
‘Coz I can’t handle the abuse on top of every thing else!
…And people just see me upset.
But they’ve leant to block it out.
And in time, you will too.
You’ll lean to hate me.
When you know,
What I’m made from underneath…
Because who’d love some one like me.
I’m a rotting corpse inside.
And no more…
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I'm a rotting corpse inside and no more!

Contributed by deathdrop on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:17:15 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I lie down on my bed.
I’m thinking about things.
The way they’ve added up.
The strong emotions they’ve left within me.
And how I’m meant to cope now.
How I’m meant to live with the pain digging through me,
Eating away at me.
Killing me inside.
I don’t know any more.
I’m out of ideas.
All I know, is that,
This is me.
It’s who I am.
It’s what I’ve become.
I’m the girl,
That’s never gonna change.
… ‘Coz I’ll never stop cutting.
And being this stupid, quiet person over there.
Talking to people but swelling up inside,
Is just who I am.
I’m that type of person that,
When some one’s hisses out abuse in my face,
It hurts me.
… And it makes me want to cry.
‘Coz I can’t handle the abuse on top of every thing else!
…And people just see me upset.
But they’ve leant to block it out.
And in time, you will too.
You’ll lean to hate me.
When you know,
What I’m made from underneath…
Because who’d love some one like me.
I’m a rotting corpse inside.
And no more…

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Re: I'm a rotting corpse inside and no more! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:34:09 AM AEST
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you are what you believe you are, I dont see rot, nor decay, only agony hurt and torment, from others lies and anger, you say you are cutting yourself, yet if you think about it, it is others that are pulling the strings, it is their ugliness aimed at you that is making you cut, hey you dont have to listen too me, I talk like this because I know what it is like to be hurt, burnt of feeling inside, and I have bled my bloddied tears, and maybe when I am pushed too far again I will bleed again.my skin is a tapistry of scarred tissue, and corrupted flesh, So I dont see what you think people will see, I see you. So if you wanna friend, here I am, if you dont then no worries.
You have a beautiful mind, full of talent, your words scream it out, your poems are vivid and visual full of raging emotions, maybe you dont want to hear, this, but I only speak what I feel and see, nothing else, I dont talk crap, so take these words as you will either way it matters not.
Take care always and peace be with you.

Karl

Re: I'm a rotting corpse inside and no more! (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:24:37 AM AEST
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Feeling like this is sad, but I understand and know your pain. You are not alone in feeling this way. Your piece hit home in so many ways. Thank-you for sharing your heart and exposing your inner self. That takes courage. This was a hard one to read for me, but it spoke volumes to my heart. This poem is what good writing is all about. Keep it up, keep ‘em coming!

Laurie

Re: I'm a rotting corpse inside and no more! (User Rating: 1 )
by Nicole_Rahaman on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 08:05:48 AM AEST
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If you can only see what a beautiful person you are...

For you to feel the feelings that you do, you obviously have a lot of value within and the stains of abuse just keep covering them... If there was no value inside in the first place, then you cant feel a loss of it now.

So my friend you see, I believe that soon those stains are going to be washed away and the true beauty of your inner person will shine.

Luv ya
Nics.

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