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Array ( [sid] => 69526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Teenage Suicide [time] => 2004-10-31 03:17:39 [hometext] => Comments welcome. Sometimes you feel like you want to stop fighting it all and give up and...... [bodytext] => I write a poem to say goodbye,
don't you fret I'll leave on a high.
As of today the pain has left.
but I'll leave in a terrible mess.
My body splattered all over the ground,
peices of me will be all around.
I know a few people might even care,
care that teenage suicide is in the air.

Death to me is but a happy end,
I was not going to mend.
The ground will set me free,
but for other people the'd rather not see,
what teenage suicide has done to me.

Life is full of ups and downs,
people will stand all around,
with me dead without a sound.
Unless you see you'll never understand,
the pain of the words that come out of their mouths.
The looks in their eyes burning your neck,
until there's nothing to fight for left.

They might feel guilty but it will pass,
because they have sticks shived up their ***'.
They are popular for being rude,
underneath they won't feel crude.
I don't know why they take it so far,
they don't understand the effect.

I wish they were nicer to me,
then maybe I could be,
Hollie H*****, the real me.
You see they don't know who I am,
only know my reactions to them.

Even if their not dissing me,
you expect them to be.
So you wait til they do,
wait until they trample you.
They like to diss you,
about your unreal past.
But don't realise they've unlocked the key,
to how they can hurt me.

So I say good-bye now,
hope no-one share's a frown.
When they realise I'm nothing now,
they will never see me again. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hollie85 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Teenage Suicide

Contributed by Hollie85 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:17:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I write a poem to say goodbye,
don't you fret I'll leave on a high.
As of today the pain has left.
but I'll leave in a terrible mess.
My body splattered all over the ground,
peices of me will be all around.
I know a few people might even care,
care that teenage suicide is in the air.

Death to me is but a happy end,
I was not going to mend.
The ground will set me free,
but for other people the'd rather not see,
what teenage suicide has done to me.

Life is full of ups and downs,
people will stand all around,
with me dead without a sound.
Unless you see you'll never understand,
the pain of the words that come out of their mouths.
The looks in their eyes burning your neck,
until there's nothing to fight for left.

They might feel guilty but it will pass,
because they have sticks shived up their ***'.
They are popular for being rude,
underneath they won't feel crude.
I don't know why they take it so far,
they don't understand the effect.

I wish they were nicer to me,
then maybe I could be,
Hollie H*****, the real me.
You see they don't know who I am,
only know my reactions to them.

Even if their not dissing me,
you expect them to be.
So you wait til they do,
wait until they trample you.
They like to diss you,
about your unreal past.
But don't realise they've unlocked the key,
to how they can hurt me.

So I say good-bye now,
hope no-one share's a frown.
When they realise I'm nothing now,
they will never see me again.

Copyright © Hollie85 ... [ 2004-10-31 03:17:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Teenage Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:27:05 AM AEST
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Very sad and you expressed your self very well in this poem, i like it tons.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: Teenage Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:45:03 AM AEST
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This is very powerful, emotional and sad.
But with you're surname, this will irritate me for the rest of the day now.
mmm, it's not 'HAYDEN' is it?

Re: Teenage Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 09:09:43 AM AEST
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very dark and very sad, well written, keep expressing yourself through your poetry, you have a great way with words,

takecare

pixie xx

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