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Array ( [sid] => 69495 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Change [time] => 2004-10-30 21:02:12 [hometext] => This is for my ex-boyfriend. I dont know what will happen in my life but I know I have learned from all I have done. [bodytext] => I lay here
watching, waiting, hoping, praying
that you will come back
that you will talk to me
that i will have you back
but times change
some people stay the same
but who can you blame
some people change
but how can i arrange
the fact that
I have changed
You have changed
we are so different now
Yet I kept watching
I was still waiting
I found myself hoping
down on my knees praying
But I am stronger now
All because of you
I am weaker now
Because of all you put me through
Even though I waited for you
I know for certain now
You're not mine, you never were
so I'm giving up...
starting now [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lilracer37 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Change

Contributed by lilracer37 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 09:02:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I lay here
watching, waiting, hoping, praying
that you will come back
that you will talk to me
that i will have you back
but times change
some people stay the same
but who can you blame
some people change
but how can i arrange
the fact that
I have changed
You have changed
we are so different now
Yet I kept watching
I was still waiting
I found myself hoping
down on my knees praying
But I am stronger now
All because of you
I am weaker now
Because of all you put me through
Even though I waited for you
I know for certain now
You're not mine, you never were
so I'm giving up...
starting now

Copyright © lilracer37 ... [ 2004-10-30 21:02:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:46:30 PM AEST
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I like your style of writing. You're good.

J~

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 03:13:27 PM AEST
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BOOTIFULL~thanx for the compliment but everyone is really good just some people have their good/bad days,this was the only poem of urs i've read so far but it was excellent so i might keep in touch,ur poem was so good,it reminded me of the good charlotte song predictable,thats a good thing,i'm obsessed with them guys,well g2g keep up the awesome writes

savedbydeath

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