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Array ( [sid] => 69473 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Boom [time] => 2004-10-30 16:50:07 [hometext] => I wrote this when i was in one of my suicidal rages [bodytext] => My hands shake as the gun points at my head
I look at your picture and I wonder if ill be dead
I think of the good times that we had together
but now I find myself wondering why even bother?
My breath becomes shorter as I think of the trigger
suddenly the light at the end of the tunnel gets bigger and bigger
I cant stop thinking of you but you are not here
I wish u could hold me to prevent me from doing it then and there
I love you so much yet its something I have to do
and the last thing I hear is the faint sound boom
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Boom

Contributed by born_to_die89 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:50:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

My hands shake as the gun points at my head
I look at your picture and I wonder if ill be dead
I think of the good times that we had together
but now I find myself wondering why even bother?
My breath becomes shorter as I think of the trigger
suddenly the light at the end of the tunnel gets bigger and bigger
I cant stop thinking of you but you are not here
I wish u could hold me to prevent me from doing it then and there
I love you so much yet its something I have to do
and the last thing I hear is the faint sound boom

Copyright © born_to_die89 ... [ 2004-10-30 16:50:07]
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Re: Boom (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenbylove130 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:35:11 PM AEST
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i really liked this. the feelings right before you are about to do something this are so clear and strong. as great as this is though you know, hopefully, that this is so not the answer. if you ever get into one of these suicidal rages again and you need someone to vent to...im here. i know that you dont know me but ive been in the same positon as you. i know what it feels like to want to die and give everything up. please dont.
~much love~
~mandi~

Re: Boom (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 06:35:44 PM AEST
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pretty good took there all im thinkin about now is hearing the boom if i was about to end it all heck u just saved me good write

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