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Weeping Willow (revised)
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:07:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your fragile,
like glass.
I'll hold you like silk.
And keep you like wine.
I won't break your unmended soul.
Like a shy spider you creep.
In my arms you weep.
Dry your tears with my dress.
And covered in your blood,
I pray,
To see you happy,
to feed your heart.
With this block on your face,
I cannot see you.
With this barrier between us,
I cannot help you.
Trust me darling,
I'm here to stay.
I will not fall,
Your dolefully wanted,
and betrayingly kept.
In the shadow of your past,
you struggle to stand up.
You lie in my arms,
eating away the pain.
You lie alone,
in your puddle of misery.
Holding onto the doubt,
and the hurt she blessed you with.
Kissed by a devil.
Mislead by a coil of pain.
Trust me my love,
things will never be the same.
And I'll stand here and wait for you
to crawl back into your shell.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
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2004-10-30 11:07:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Weeping Willow (revised)
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:15:51 AM AEST (User
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as I said when you first posted it, an amazing write, very emotional and written so well,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Weeping Willow (revised)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:20:35 AM AEST (User
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fantastic write. =] |
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Re: Weeping Willow (revised)
(User Rating: 1 ) by co_cane13 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:45:25 PM AEST (User
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great poem it is so descriptive yet without a lot of words. a masterpiece. bravo. |
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