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Darkness Enveloping as I Free Fall
Contributed by
Dany
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Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:19:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness growing all around me,
There is nothing that I can see.
Beaten hard over abused,
Felling much more than just used.
I am sinking ever deeper,
My decline grows more steeper.
This darkness is where I live,
No more light for me to give.
Darkness eats up everything,
There's no happy songs to sing.
Too much pain for me to bare,
But when did you ever care?
I shove a knife into my heart,
The beating stops to never start.
I am gone forever more,
Add up the and count the score.
Heart ache takes over even more.
Happiness transformed into a thing of the of the past,
Shadows and doubt are everywhere cast.
Blood flows blackened with hate and sorrow,
War and battle kills tomorrow.
i am falling now forever and eternal,
I am bleeding in my internal.
Copyright ©
Dany
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2004-10-30 10:19:08]
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Re: Darkness Enveloping as I Free Fall
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by pixie on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:20:37 AM AEST
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wow, very dark and emotional,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Darkness Enveloping as I Free Fall
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:31:21 AM AEST
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| excellent write. very well written. sometimes you need to let others know whats wrong, because you cant deal with it on your own. |
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Re: Darkness Enveloping as I Free Fall
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by TwEeK on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:25:31 PM AEST
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War and battle kills tomorrow.
i am falling now forever and eternal,
I am bleeding in my internal.
those are my favourite lines...so beautifully written..love it lots..
you have talent there my friend..you truly do..
if ya ever need to chat, im here.
im here, there and everywhere.
=D
-Tweek |
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