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Array ( [sid] => 69413 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Find it Hard to Feel [time] => 2004-10-30 03:57:26 [hometext] => Just something that came to me!! The beginnings of a new relationship!! ENJOY!!!!! [bodytext] => I Find it Hard to Feel

And so you said, lets get to my car
I'll take you out on the town tonight
And you know how I trust you

I'm so cold
So please don't me down or let me go or let the darkness get to me
I'm so cold

You don't really know, you don't really know
Because if you had this heart
You'd find it hard to be kind, too

I find it hard to feel
'Cause it's always give a little bit more heart, give a little more soul, give a little more love
It's like money, nothing is too much

I find it hard to feel
I just want to laugh a lot
I just want to go the Beastie Boys concert

But as we travel in your car and I watch this city in the night
Driving across the bridge, bathed in the pink neon light, with the Harbour, silent beneath me
I'm at peace and I let your hand caress me

The radio is playing songs about breaking up
I'm listening for a song that sums me up
I'm in a place where just about anything means something to me

I live like a junkie
I scream into a disconnected phone
I'm addicted to my past

I'm so cold
And if you had this heart you'd find it hard to be kind, too
I'm so cold

I hate it when people don't get my double meanings
I find it hard to feel
I like your face

When did everything become so complicated?
Why did I let you go?
Does this feel like pain?

Will the Ocean one day wash us all away?
Will there ever be another John Lennon?
'Cause we need to look now

Soon enough we reach the cliff
As the waves crash against the rock
And like young children we wander down to the shoreline

You look so pretty in the night
And it's like the water is warmed by the starlight
And I take you in my arms

I'm kissing more than everything
I'm kissing all the places inside
I'm almost on my knees

And I'm saying, I might not be able to answer anything
I might not be able to beat the lie dectector
But I've got a heart, and I'm not afraid,
The damage was all done a long time ago, and people can still move on

I know this all might turn out to be nothing
I know this is just a little fling right now
I know I find it hard to feel,
But in your car and in your arms, I feel like nothing can hurt me, anymore.

(David Finn, 2004) [comments] => 5 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 43 [informant] => redlantern2051 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I Find it Hard to Feel

Contributed by redlantern2051 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 03:57:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I Find it Hard to Feel

And so you said, lets get to my car
I'll take you out on the town tonight
And you know how I trust you

I'm so cold
So please don't me down or let me go or let the darkness get to me
I'm so cold

You don't really know, you don't really know
Because if you had this heart
You'd find it hard to be kind, too

I find it hard to feel
'Cause it's always give a little bit more heart, give a little more soul, give a little more love
It's like money, nothing is too much

I find it hard to feel
I just want to laugh a lot
I just want to go the Beastie Boys concert

But as we travel in your car and I watch this city in the night
Driving across the bridge, bathed in the pink neon light, with the Harbour, silent beneath me
I'm at peace and I let your hand caress me

The radio is playing songs about breaking up
I'm listening for a song that sums me up
I'm in a place where just about anything means something to me

I live like a junkie
I scream into a disconnected phone
I'm addicted to my past

I'm so cold
And if you had this heart you'd find it hard to be kind, too
I'm so cold

I hate it when people don't get my double meanings
I find it hard to feel
I like your face

When did everything become so complicated?
Why did I let you go?
Does this feel like pain?

Will the Ocean one day wash us all away?
Will there ever be another John Lennon?
'Cause we need to look now

Soon enough we reach the cliff
As the waves crash against the rock
And like young children we wander down to the shoreline

You look so pretty in the night
And it's like the water is warmed by the starlight
And I take you in my arms

I'm kissing more than everything
I'm kissing all the places inside
I'm almost on my knees

And I'm saying, I might not be able to answer anything
I might not be able to beat the lie dectector
But I've got a heart, and I'm not afraid,
The damage was all done a long time ago, and people can still move on

I know this all might turn out to be nothing
I know this is just a little fling right now
I know I find it hard to feel,
But in your car and in your arms, I feel like nothing can hurt me, anymore.

(David Finn, 2004)




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Re: I Find it Hard to Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 04:03:29 AM AEST
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this is one beautiful poem, hope everything goes well with your relationship.

hugs,
Jane


Re: I Find it Hard to Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by THORN on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:41:09 AM AEST
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I hope for the best for you as well since I can sense you're really feeling what you write, you've written tons, but yet you feel more you don't know how to express, how to put into words, it's very good.


Cheers,
-Raye


Re: I Find it Hard to Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Redlantern2051 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 06:47:30 AM AEST
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Thanks guys!! I'm really happy u enjoyed it!!! It was quite cathartic to write and now I can sit, and enjoy the finished prduct, too!!!


Re: I Find it Hard to Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:47:31 AM AEST
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i think we all find it hard to feel until we learn to trust that person, I hope that your relationship works out well for you,a good write,

pixie xx


Re: I Find it Hard to Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 11:44:58 AM AEST
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=] great write.




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