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Array ( [sid] => 69400 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fantasy [time] => 2004-10-29 23:03:30 [hometext] => This is just a song I wrote about someone... [bodytext] => Once, twice, three times defied
Scarred by a fake, knowing you lied
Thought I knew you, proved myself wrong
Eyes damp as I write this love song

Loved someone I never truly knew
Fell for your act, you left no clue
Ripped this heart free from a love so deep
But it wasn’t love
Never love
Not love if it’s not returned

Why can’t someone hold me
Heard fantasies of love to be
Swept off my feet by none but he
But it’s all just a lie

Why can’t you ever see
How this love was meant to be
Willing me to run free…
But I just crumble and cry, cry, cry
I crumble and cry

You’ll never know I lived for you
You pulled me out of the blue
Lived on a feeling, called it love
Never knew that I wasn’t enough

Can’t describe this hurt, it’s too late
Won’t take me back, it’s written in fate
Thought I met someone I loved…
But it wasn’t love
Never love
Not love if it isn’t returned

Why can’t someone hold me
Heard fantasies of love to be
Swept off my feet by none but he
But it’s all just a lie

Why can’t you ever see
How this love was meant to be
Willing me to run free…
But I just crumble and cry, cry, cry
I crumble and cry

Why do they tell me I’m far too young
Not old enough to feel this devotion
Is it stupid to bring up the notion?
Why don’t you feel this pain, the strain
You don’t care
Never did
Did you?

Why can’t you just hold me
Heard fantasies of love to be
Swept off my feet by none but he
It’s a lie, yeah

Why can’t you ever see
How this love was meant to be
Willing me to run free…
But I just crumble and cry, cry cry…
I ain’t ever gonna fly













[comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Stej [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Fantasy

Contributed by Stej on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:03:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Once, twice, three times defied
Scarred by a fake, knowing you lied
Thought I knew you, proved myself wrong
Eyes damp as I write this love song

Loved someone I never truly knew
Fell for your act, you left no clue
Ripped this heart free from a love so deep
But it wasn’t love
Never love
Not love if it’s not returned

Why can’t someone hold me
Heard fantasies of love to be
Swept off my feet by none but he
But it’s all just a lie

Why can’t you ever see
How this love was meant to be
Willing me to run free…
But I just crumble and cry, cry, cry
I crumble and cry

You’ll never know I lived for you
You pulled me out of the blue
Lived on a feeling, called it love
Never knew that I wasn’t enough

Can’t describe this hurt, it’s too late
Won’t take me back, it’s written in fate
Thought I met someone I loved…
But it wasn’t love
Never love
Not love if it isn’t returned

Why can’t someone hold me
Heard fantasies of love to be
Swept off my feet by none but he
But it’s all just a lie

Why can’t you ever see
How this love was meant to be
Willing me to run free…
But I just crumble and cry, cry, cry
I crumble and cry

Why do they tell me I’m far too young
Not old enough to feel this devotion
Is it stupid to bring up the notion?
Why don’t you feel this pain, the strain
You don’t care
Never did
Did you?

Why can’t you just hold me
Heard fantasies of love to be
Swept off my feet by none but he
It’s a lie, yeah

Why can’t you ever see
How this love was meant to be
Willing me to run free…
But I just crumble and cry, cry cry…
I ain’t ever gonna fly

















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Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by runaway0516 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:20:59 PM AEST
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i really do like this...it reminds me of someone i know...great write plz keep writing


Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:23:01 PM AEST
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A beautifully written ballad, of feelings and visuals, heart wrenching images of love betrayed, awesome write, enjoyed reading this.


Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:33:26 PM AEST
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Very sad but great writing.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 10:34:18 AM AEST
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This is great, I like it, flows really well. I actually did start humming when I was reading it. :)




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