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You weren't their to discriminate, or embarass me.
You helped me out with just a few kind words.
And it kills me to see you so far away.
You were understanding when you found I was sad.
Comforting me when you knew I was mad.
I'll miss your smile.
I'll miss your laugh.
But mostly i'll miss the times that we've had.
Promise me that you'll come back.
So may be this heartache will not last.
I know that you'll try, but incase it goes wrong.
Just do one thing for me, love.
Please remember me.
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Please Remember Me

Contributed by blossomingcherry5353 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:57:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

The day you found out that I loved you relieved me.
You weren't their to discriminate, or embarass me.
You helped me out with just a few kind words.
And it kills me to see you so far away.
You were understanding when you found I was sad.
Comforting me when you knew I was mad.
I'll miss your smile.
I'll miss your laugh.
But mostly i'll miss the times that we've had.
Promise me that you'll come back.
So may be this heartache will not last.
I know that you'll try, but incase it goes wrong.
Just do one thing for me, love.
Please remember me.

Copyright © blossomingcherry5353 ... [ 2004-10-29 20:57:14]
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Re: Please Remember Me (User Rating: 1 )
by lilracer37 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:12:33 PM AEST
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very good, i can so relate, i love someone so much and it would kill me if they ever forgot me, one thing u have to do is dont make it so they can forget you, stay in touch with them make it so they cant forget you

Re: Please Remember Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 09:24:32 PM AEST
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yea like da wee lilracer said keep in touch and dont let em ferget you that would suck if they did good poem

Re: Please Remember Me (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:26:20 PM AEST
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i love your poem strong and all the right words i could feel the words as i read them keep it up.

brad

Re: Please Remember Me (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 01:09:20 AM AEST
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Cool poem written beautifully and well. thanks for posting it.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: Please Remember Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 08:59:34 AM AEST
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beautiful and emotionally written,

takecare

pixie xx

Re: Please Remember Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:03:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful, beautiful poem!! I can relate..
Thanks for sharing :-)

Re: Please Remember Me (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 08:22:10 AM AEST
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i loved your poem, its great.....thats exactly how i feel for this guy named chris i love!!hope everything works out between you two!!

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