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the lies and bloodlust having taken their toll.
Of the injuries she cried, and sook out redemption,
bloody tears streaming down with no particular direction.
Through the dark forest she ran, mud clinging to her,
she fell in the rain and was completely sure,
that everyone was meant to die painfully alone,
noone caring for you, when into death you're thrown,
and her corpse decayed into the soft ground,
with only a cry echoing around,
and she sobbed in her death, a ghostly spirit,
if you begin to listen, you may just hear it,
the pain of a young eleven year old girl,
who tried but lost any hope in this world. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 39 [informant] => assassinatorgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

A Scream They Never Heard

Contributed by assassinatorgirl on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:28:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

And the threads of hate were sewn into this soul,
the lies and bloodlust having taken their toll.
Of the injuries she cried, and sook out redemption,
bloody tears streaming down with no particular direction.
Through the dark forest she ran, mud clinging to her,
she fell in the rain and was completely sure,
that everyone was meant to die painfully alone,
noone caring for you, when into death you're thrown,
and her corpse decayed into the soft ground,
with only a cry echoing around,
and she sobbed in her death, a ghostly spirit,
if you begin to listen, you may just hear it,
the pain of a young eleven year old girl,
who tried but lost any hope in this world.

Copyright © assassinatorgirl ... [ 2004-10-29 20:28:33]
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Re: A Scream They Never Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by lilracer37 on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 08:59:58 PM AEST
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its really good, you seem like u have a lot to say and no one to say it to

Re: A Scream They Never Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:12:41 PM AEST
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This was simply magnificent!!!
BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! AND WELCOME TO YPDC!!!! You're going to love it here, for we are all loving family...........and we welcome you aboard!!! You have so much talent, and so much to share.........you will find we really care here at YPDC! Thank you for your fine comments, you are also very kind indeed!
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hugs to you!

Re: A Scream They Never Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 11:34:52 PM AEST
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Very visual and chilling, an awesome write, with feelings of pure fear and lost hope, cool poem well worth reading it, 5/5 from me.

Re: A Scream They Never Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:40:31 AM AEST
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wow, this is awesome, you're so talented!

Re: A Scream They Never Heard (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:32:54 PM AEST
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This is so sad, but a very good write.
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